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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
{s}saki bows to her... i tell you. what is the world coming to? [y]oh shut up saki already said she liked you over me and plus you have lady. but i draw the line at kagome. (k)dont you dare put my name in this i told you before its a story. but if you dont stop... *naraku*i just might take her from you. hehehe :me:how many times must i tell you your not wlecome here? +m+hey sango... @_@ what was that for??? ^san^you... you.. +m+ it wasnt me this time i swear... touch her again naraku and i'll kill you *n*you and what army kuukuukuu "kik"oh stop you freak. do you have to take them all? what about me(pouts)fine i'll take yasha and leave you all(grabs yasha's arm and pulls) :me:leave my bro alone you freak jar of clay (slashes at kik)(kik shoots arrow) {s}enough get out of my house...errr...my lady's house. i want some peace. [y]i'd like to but ive got three women fight over me hehehe (k)if your going to act like that then...(kag and me lets yasha go) (yasha and kik go flying) (sessho picks up naraku and throws him out) :me:its about time {s}now lil bro i think you had better go and apologize to kag now *m*yeah before she decides to leave you again come on sango lets go to the movies bye ya'll and good chappie saki :me:peace and quiet for now my love come i'll bow just for you ^_O{s}@_@ woohoo pretty kewl chappie. poor kag,naraku chasing after her and yasha hanging with kik ewww...hopefully sessho makes another entrance soon. and together they beat kik and naraku :) see ya soon
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Title: Kizu
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 04, 2004 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: leysha On: November 04, 2004 07:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic. you have got ot keep going. i hope its as good as its going to seem.
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Reviewed By: LadySessho-not logged in On: October 30, 2004 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O wow hehehe sessho sure seems to like kag. he even tried poetry :me: how come you never do that with me {s} uh...uh... [y]gocha on that one bro *sigh* so you dont love me as much huh? well i still have kagome (kag) *blushes* isnt he the sweetest *narak* hah i beat the great sessho ^kik^ no it was me you fool (kag) but i release him you dummy now hes gonna get you {s} and when i do *laughs evilly* :me:excuse me but you never answered my question {s}but my love :me:no buts hehehe then again *grins evilly* *narak*ummm... hello im the stronger one here how come you keep throwing yourself at him when he doesnt even care for you? come to me and i'll make your dreams come true {s}touch her and die monkey man. i will rip you to shreds and feed your remains to the hounds of hell if you so much as go near her again :me:wow what a way to a girls heart (kag)*shakes head* i really dont know what you see in him sister. even i have trouble with yasha but he eventullay shows his feelings :me: yeah he's showing with kikyou right now ^kik^come to hell with me (kag) i told you to stay away from him *shoots arrow* ^kik^b*tch you know it cant hurt me :me:no but i can *slash kikyou* leave my lil bro alone {s}hey how come your defending him? :me: not talking to you...ah get your fitly hands off me naraku *narak* mine...mine... {s}*posion slash* i thought i told you... lady are you okay my love?... NNNNNOOOOO hurry someone get kaeda. well saki you done it again love the chappie more,more,more :)
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hon you're as great for my ego as i'm for yours. :D so yasha finally decides to make his appearence huh lol see you silly pup your in this one too [y] ha i knew it Murasaki just loves me. what no how come sessho always shows up? *pouts* {s} because Saki loves me more than you halfbreed (k) oh SIT the both of you :ME: hehehe (K) kewl i have a new teacher so am i supposed to be falling for yasha or wait til i meet seesho??? *N* who cares miko. when am i coming back? i want to see my lovely lil kag but maybe i'll just settle for lady again hehehe :ME: oh no. not again i felt like jane with the monkey man last week. wainting for my all mighty tarzan there to stop fighting with the little chimp to caome and save me and it ended up being sango and kagome that did. ^san^ who invited naraku anyway? and how did kikyou get here. hey you lecher get away from her *smack* +mir+ @_@ but..but.. i... it was her not me *kik* why does kag always get the guy??? and why am i always bad *pouts* oh yeah cause i am :me: never a moments peace here. next chappy please love your work... now to get rid of unwanted guests... any ideas ppl? *shouts in backgraound* i'll be waiting for your update. locked in my room with sessho *grins evilly* and the puter lol. come along lil doggie. lets go play... fetch...the cherry o_^
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Reviewed By: celesvictoria007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 22:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Good story so far! I hope you're consistent with your updates, I'm really looking forward to seeing how this pans out!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: October 22, 2004 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chap! I'm going to assume that during the two years Kagome hasn't been threatened in any way, seeing who she is still alive. Another thing, is Sesshomaru related to Inuyasha? Anyways, I couldn't put the over all rating because the little box wasn't there for some reason, just to let you know it's a ten, k. Can't wait for the next chap!
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Title: dude this so kewl :)
Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O wow {Kag} first she makes me strong then she i get drugged. by kikyou no less. :ME: oh shut up at least ur in a story. sigh.. but i love the first chappie. such feeling. poor kag, damn kikyou if i could get my hands on her. doing that to a child why i outa... *Naraku* what my love? you should worry about what im going to do to the girl. and you when i kill sesshomaru are going to be mine :ME: how the hell did u get in here? yahsa ur slipping again [yasha] i thought i smelled ur stench naraku. time for u to die *N* but u wont hurt ur sister-in-law to get to me will u? *N grabs me* :ME struggles: SESSHO (Kag) let her go u... what are u doing here kikyou? ~Kik~ anything i can to destroy u all {Sessho} what?? HOW??? let her go and fight me :ME: took u long enough. where were u? {Sessho flushes} i uh.. never mind naraku prepare to die yasha if you hurt her with that sword i'll kill u too. o_O write next chappie soon so these guys will let me get to my stuff. dont u just hate when guys fight over you ^_O beautiful so far.
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Reviewed By: Lianya On: October 17, 2004 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story! I hope you continue it. Keep up wit hthe good work. Short swords rule!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: October 17, 2004 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its an interesting start. Will you be telling us the parings any time soon, I'm very curious.
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