| "Foul Play" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Title: sad
Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 00:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
is this staying dead?
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Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz post soon
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Reviewed By: skeezo On: January 28, 2005 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you need to update faster for everyone that is reading your story so please please update faster thanks
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Reviewed By: DemonicTenshi84 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY good fic loved it keep it up and update soon !
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Reviewed By: silveredge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 17:13 CST
Comment/Review:
update soon?please? i would really appriciate it ;_;
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i like the story....you have a great way with the words and a great character depiction set aside for each character. i think its great how you have worked in all angles for all characters, instead of just focusing on the pair (that we all love so much). a lot of fics can't manage that. i think your plot is awsome...i can't wait to read more. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 23:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome story!!!! I can't wait until they learn each others dark secrets about one another!!! That will be great. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love(not loged in) On: November 26, 2004 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
me likey! me likey! update again soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Arthursgirl On: November 25, 2004 23:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the story, but what the hell is up with your spacing?! You're making me cross-eyed!
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Reviewed By: Arthursgirl On: November 25, 2004 23:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the story, but what the hell is up with your spacing?! You're making me cross-eyed!
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Reviewed By: Arthurschick On: November 25, 2004 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story, but what the hell is up with your spacing?! You're making me cross-eyed!
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Reviewed By: silveredge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 13:27 CST
Comment/Review:
uhhh.... good fic but... your spacing is verrrrry weird... @_@... the bigness... AHHHHHHHHH ITS STALKING ME!!!! *runs away*
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged in) On: November 22, 2004 22:05 CST
Comment/Review:
this chapter was a little too short, but twas still good! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: MoonSanctum On: November 22, 2004 14:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting. Not really that original yet, the bite thing has been done in the past. Not to hear each others thoughts, that I know of, but it was to make them go into lust with each other. And I've read ficcies where they could read each others thoughts, and where they switched bodies, and where.. well you get hte picture. I don't know why but when the guy was offering the money I just got this wierd image of it being Miroku, but then he acted completely clueless. *sniffle* I guess it wasn't him. Anyway, keep the lustful thoughts coming. I bet Inu does have an extremely nice ass. Too bad you can't tell what with those baggy pants he wears...Hakamas right?? I don't know maybe I'm getting the clothing words all mixed up. Update soon. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 13:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Cute! Please continue. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: lol *giggle* On: November 01, 2004 16:03 CST
Comment/Review:
that's so awesome. i can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 00:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooo! so far so good!
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
SO FUCKING AWSOME DUDE!UPDATE SOON PLEZ ^>^'
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cute! i CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW IT GOES ON!!... damn caps locks
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 16:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this story. u have 2 update it sounds really good! being able 2 read eachothers minds... u just no thats gonna lead 2 truble. ^_^ cant wait 4 the update!
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