| "Pressure" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Extremely enjoyable
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've written a warmhearted and terrific fanfiction here. Everthing I like in a V/B get together cannon fiction. Vegeta's sensitivity warring with his hard a$$ side was portrayed beautifully as well as his doubt. The implied lemon also came at a good pace. Not too fast, and not to slow. Just right. All the elements of a 'classic' get together. Well done. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: 651716 On: November 18, 2004 21:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I love the sentance structure, only needed words and nothing else.
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Title: Pressure
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 06:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story..i just wish it was longer chapters.and more of it...please update soon.maria
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