| "The Naruto, Tsunade & Shizune Project" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: Leaprechaun1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 19:14 CST
Comment/Review:
For the love of my sanity please finish this story!!!
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Leaprechaun1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 08:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chaos_star951 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story so far. Are you still working on it at all? I'd like to find out what else happens. So if you don't mind then could you please write up the next chapter?
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 22:13 CDT
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I love the story but the only thing I will say don`t even bother asking for another chapter or two because this author won`t get off his or her ass to do it so why bother asking for another chapter just look at the last time it was updated and think hel I wold love to see another chapter or two but what my grandmother always told me wish in one hand and shit in the other what will fill up first oh well
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Reviewed By: Zero Asakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! well i guess here Shizune should properly enter the plot and... both of them show Naruto what'r they made of inside... literally i think you should add some more romance parts here too not because i dislike this but rather because that way i think i'll find next chapters more enjoyable and realistic (?) good luck and please update soon!
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Title: Needs an update
Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm wondering how Shizune joins in all this. And why haven't you updated in so long?
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Reviewed By: BlackJudgment [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love This story!!!! Plz post next chappy!!! (Insert puppy dog eyes)
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Reviewed By: ninofchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is just amazing. can't wait for the next chapter to come out
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Reviewed By: Gaara of the Sand54956 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LemonLover On: March 02, 2005 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very very good please make another installment i dont think i can wait any longer for the next one to come and i really need some naruto to read other than stupid yaois but no offense to the people who write them i just the like the fact of boys getting it on with boys but back to the point this needs MORE CHAPTER.
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Title: Har Har Har
Reviewed By: flame13th [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 06:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long live smut!!! Write more!!! Need more of this kind of story
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Reviewed By: ??? On: November 16, 2004 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write some more! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Lucifer666 On: November 07, 2004 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was fucking awsome you are an excellent author and i agree with you we need more stories like this and bit less yaoi. Keep this up guy i look forward to the next installment
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Title: Bravo
Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 17:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
First of all, I'd like to say this is quite well written. I only noticed one or two minor mistakes. The scenes were very descriptive, something which most lemons lack. This has to be one of the most original ideas and I can't wait to see more.
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Title: hmr
Reviewed By: hmr On: October 25, 2004 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWOW! WHat a fic! I hope you continue this! Great writing here! Keep writing and update soon! This kind of pairing is awesome and 1st Ive ever read before.
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Reviewed By: jolopi On: October 24, 2004 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I for one look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: booyaka On: October 24, 2004 11:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fight the power man. Fight the power :raises fist in triumph: SMUT POWER
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Reviewed By: .... On: October 24, 2004 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is teh best fic ive ever ever read in my entire life!! very detailed a great choice of words and very original. thats what we need here more original ppl like u who duznt do the same things over and over like yaoi parings (i hate that waaay too much yaoi) I salute you and i cant wait to see what happens next keep it up!
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Title: fanfic, jaaaaa!
Reviewed By: Der Bäfver. On: October 23, 2004 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
du best den very good fanfic-writer, jaa! Ich liebe this fic ganzes much, jaaa! //Der Bäfver.
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Reviewed By: kaiten On: October 23, 2004 13:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
You said it was nar/tsu/shi, so that means Shizune is gonna be with naruto too?
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Reviewed By: Mr. Pointy On: October 23, 2004 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is excellent porn. Fight the yaoi!
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