| "Hidden Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: May 31, 2005 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pair Harry and Farfie up!! As for Ken, pair him with Aya-chan! I dunno on who would be the 3rd member of the trio, prehaps Sakura or Tot from Schreient?! Have Farfie keep the Slytherins in line! They've been getting away with TOO much over the years! For someone the teachers refuse to disclipine them too much, sure they take points, and give out detentions! But in my opinion they rely on Snape to punish them. But we all know Snape WON'T do anything! And pls pair Neville up with someone!
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Reviewed By: TinyKittyCat On: November 19, 2004 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LISTEN YOU! I have never seen a Farfie/harry(rei) so you do that or I'll come after you like a rabid fangirl! Oh and this story is great, by the way. Its really fun to read and it does make tons of sense. I enjoy your style of writing, and I didn't notice much wrong with spelling or grammar. Not that I was paying attention so entranced was I by the glories of your story. The originality in this is wow. Most of the creativity in the world is sucked dry but this had plenty. The originality is virtually nonexistant and you still managed to draw from the inifnate well that is dying. Honestly, I can't wait til you update! Now make it yaoi (I wont settle at all for shounen-ai) or die. Seriously, I have two swords! I'm going to leave and ignore all the odd stares now!
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Reviewed By: kurapy On: October 23, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it's short >_<
good/great but short >_<
please udapte soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CC On: October 19, 2004 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope that you continue on with this very soon. It's an original (at least to my knowledge) idea for a story. I don't usually read crossovers but this promises to be good. Write more soon!
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