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| "A lesson in Sharing" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*giggles* This was a fun idea. I hope you continue with this eventually. I wonder who is in Kirara... It's definitely not Inuyasha, as it would be more curses heard. I'm guessing Miroku. And I'm guessing he's disappointed that he has no hands to fondle women with anymore! XD As to which body Kirara has... It can't be Sesshoumaru, seeing as she thought "handS", and it's probably one of the humans. I'm guessing Kohaku for some reason. Call it a gut feeling. :) I think I'll add you to my favorites, so I'll know if you ever decide to pick up on this story. :) Oh, and the fact that I love your style of writing. I believe I've read most of your stories at least once, except for A Shard in Kyoto. I think I'll read that next...
| Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please jeffs. Please, on my knee's, continue this, And please, Please hurry?
| Title: Great plot so far!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Luv On: November 08, 2004 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome opening, i hope that you continue soon. Looking forward to how this will pan out.
| Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: October 22, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter. This sounds like its going to be one of the must funnies stories I have ever read! You know what would be interesting, to have Sess and Inu change but that might bring to much chaos…or Kagome changing with Sango or Kagura, that would be funny, seeing how both of them being physically strong cop with being in a weaker body…anyways hope you deciede to continue this sooner than planed, I think it makes for a great story, epically if your writing it. I love your stories and the way you right!
| Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 16:53 CDT
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coolsa.
| Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 19:48 CDT
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Inu-yasha- Sesshomaru (DUH), Jakken- Miroku, Kagome- Shippo (it'd be cool if you had kikyou), Kagura- Rin, Kanna- Sango Kirara- Kohaku, Kohaku- Kouga, Kouga- Naraku, Miroku- SANGO!, Naraku- Kirara, Rin- Kagura, Sango- Jaken, Sesshomaru- Inuyasha, Shippo- Kagome (trick inu), Well those are my ideas, hope they help! itd be great if you made this a big project. Keep going Jeff!
| Title: Characters
Reviewed By: Fluffy-Erutis () On: October 20, 2004 18:08 CDT
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Inuyasha in Kagura - Jaken in Kouga - Kagome in Sesshomaru - Kagura in Miroku - Kanna in Kilala - Kilala in Kohaku - Kohaku in Inuysha - Kouga in Naraku - Miroku in Jaken - Naraku in Rin - Rin in Sango - Sango in Shippo - Sesshomaru in Kagome - Shippo in Kanna Why,... Miroku Likes To Flirt, Jaken's To Ugly To Even Look At. It Would Be Hilarious For Sesshy To Be In A Women, Escpecially (Can't Spell Very Well) In Kagome, Who He Thinks Is Inu's Wench. Shippo In Kanna Because Shippo Is Pretty Klumsy, And Would Probaly Break Da Mirror. Kohaku In Inu Because Then Inu Would Be A Souless Dummy That nraku would Control, And That's Be Interesting. Jaken In kouga, Because Jaken,... I Dunno,... Sesshy In Kagome, Kagome In Sesshy = CHAOS!! Kagura is Used To Being A Woman, This Would Be,... Interesting. Kagura: OH MY GOD!! WHERE ARE MY BREATS!?!? XD Kanna In Kilala Would Make, The Emotionless Dummy Thing!! ^^ Kouga In Naraku, Kouga: So I EXPLODE Every MONTH!?!? AND THE GUTS FROM VARIOUS DEMONS FLYY EVERYWHERE!?!? XD Naraku In Rin,... Naraku: I CAN'T TAKE OVER THE WORLD IN THIS!! *Looks Down @ Body* Rin In Sango, Rin: Hey What's Wrong With My Body!? XK *Glares At Naraku/Rin Thing* Sango In Shippo,... Sango: *gets Mad At Some Random Demon* I'M GONNA KILL U!! *Runs Up To boomerang, And Tries To Pick It Up* Can't,... Pick,... *gasp* It,... *gasp* Up!! *gasp* XD Ja Ne Fluffy-Erutis
| Reviewed By: Tache [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 06:35 CDT
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OMG! That was unexpected! LOL! Update soon!
| Reviewed By: mofaf On: October 19, 2004 22:28 CDT
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Inu in Sango Jaken in Kanna Kagome in Inu Kagura in Kagome Kanna in Kohaku Kirara in Ses Kohaku in Naraku Kouga in Miroku Miroku in Jaken Naraku in Rin Rin in Kagura Sango in Kouga Ses in Shippo Shippo in Kirara
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