Reviewed By: Jaded Rose (waiting for password for account to be mailed) On: October 20, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mary Sues. Awful Mary Sues designed to make the characters act out of character. The writing is okay, and the grammar is good, but the storyline is cliched and boring.
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