| "Bitter Crimson" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: blackrose113 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 17:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
aaww! that was such a sad ending! write a sequel write a sequel writ a sequel!
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Reviewed By: PixieCat(other wise known as Child of Shadows) On: November 22, 2004 18:57 CST
Comment/Review:
*sniff* that's soooooooo sad! baka's i REALLY HOPE someone wacks them all w/ a shovel! lol
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Reviewed By: PixieCat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 22:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!*waves mini flamethrower in air* IF YOU DO I WILL GET YOU A MINI FLAME THROWER!!!!
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was really good. But only for a start, keep writing. Usually if I read a story that short I can't get a good idea on what the story is going to be about or if it's any good. But I can tell that this story is going to be good. Hey! I'm not praising you for nothing, update! NOW!
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Reviewed By: Angel Jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really good, please update.
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Reviewed By: Angel Jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 18:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a great start for the story, please update.
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