| "Deuces Wild" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 00:50 CDT
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ack! cliffhanger! hahha. this is good. :) are you planning on updating anymore? i noticed the last update was in 2004 so i thought i might ask.
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 15:40 CDT
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YOU ARE EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: November 05, 2004 15:10 CST
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Excellent, but too short. (I always think that when I want to keep reading.) I hope the stubborn muse stays with you. Sometimes it helps to go read the first chapter again and try to get that initial feeling you were going for, if you feel you're losing interest. But for heaven's sake, don't quit now. I absolutely hate unfinished stories. And don't worry too much about the lack of reviews. This site can be stingy at times in that area.
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Reviewed By: elisabeth On: November 05, 2004 03:08 CST
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THis is a fun story. Love 2x1.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Darkening Dreams On: November 04, 2004 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic a whole lot! the creativity was awsome, you're writting style is cool, and I enjoyed this fic a whole lot. I'll be looking got updates. see ya!
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: October 26, 2004 11:02 CDT
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This fic looks to be a lot of fun. I'm hoping you'll update soon.
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Title: leave the lemon for later
Reviewed By: Rude02 not sighned in On: October 23, 2004 21:24 CDT
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Its fun! and I may kick my self for this, but my advise is.... dont rush the lemon! keep on wrighting until its feels you can fit a lemon. A little more interaction between characters before they get intimate... I love Lemons with a passion but good ideas need a little more paciense than PWP. just a thought.
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