| "Mission: Distraction" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: rquickle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very entertaning. I really enjoyed it and hope you write more storys.
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Title: Your First?
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is your first attempt of ANY kind? Not only is that hard to believe, but unless you'd written something, I never would have guessed! Definately one of the most realistic 1x2 lemons I've ever read. And I can't believe you've only gotten eight reviews! Well, I suppose mine makes nine, but still! I'm adding this to my favorites and going to browse your other work. Your writing ability is amazing!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was your first lemon!? Well make more 1x2 lemons! Simply delicious.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This. Was. Way. Hot. I have never seen anyone write a lemon like that. *whistles* You are really good. But of course you know that don't you.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 21:07 CST
Comment/Review:
*is speechless* lol oh man very interesting and unique I can tell you that right off hand! It had a certain amount of kink that couples would do that sort of ... er... thing in a relationship after ya know being together a while, cuz of trust issues or just fun experimentation. Duo's clueless bit was very good very convincing! My only Quirk here is that what if Duo wasn't willing to go through all that just to be in a relationship with Yuy? Especially if this is the first indication that he had given Duo about being interested in his advances? Yea yea i guess prehaps Dudes don't think the same as girls do about relationships and regardless of that some relationships just start off weird. overall, a well written piece and my hentai side approves greatly! what are you planning to write next?
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Reviewed By: Alea On: November 27, 2004 13:31 CST
Comment/Review:
aaaah i think what other restraining item Heero is gonna put on Duo :P (the ring!)right right? anyway nice chap and Duo's rather clueless quess he aint so good in taking a hint huh? update soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel* On: November 14, 2004 23:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Did you have to ask?! yes!!! continue, i'm a hentai i know but Duo is really not thinking sex, so will this be his first sexual experience? 'cuz for him to not realize the sexual implications here suggests that he really doesn't know much about sex or heero's intentions!!! eventhough he does want to be with Heero. Unless This is some sort of role playing the two are engaging in, if so Duo plays the nieve innocent very well. So yes more please! i want to know how duo feels about this after the deed is done.
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Reviewed By: darkdragon91 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 15:46 CST
Comment/Review:
omg plz update it is sooo good!!! and i cant believe duo has no clue yet i mean come he's suppose to be one of the most alert ppl in g-wing lol. =D
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Reviewed By: emerald eyes On: November 14, 2004 01:48 CST
Comment/Review:
so is duo facing the front of heero or is it his back to heero's chest? heeheee......now update again soon....(snicker...i can't believe duo hasn't got a clue yet...)
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: October 22, 2004 05:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
'You need to hurry up or I'll choose for you...' LOL oh man, way to comeon to Duo, a part of mission parameters, two inch cuffs, I wonder there they will go? I wonder if Duo has figured out that his part in the mission has something to do with sex with Heero? Will He be willing to take that step even though it seems that they hadn't even talk about being together or going out with eachother before this? So Heero said he'll make the decision for Duo huh? I don't like it. Heero seems to be very onetracked and would probably do what he intends to do even if Duo protests. So how will this direct the rest of this baby? Will Heero do what he wants any way and Duo refuses in the middle and feels used and unsure of himself... causing Heero to persue or avoid him until he figures out his own conflicting emotions and tries to confront Duo and apologize that it was not the best tactic (which mean a nice long story *Smirks*)? Will Duo go along with, they rump around in Wing before, after and probably during the mission and clears the air with an I love ya or he doesn't and lets Duo go? There's other possibilities but alas I must go to work *sighs* I hope you continue, its bound to be interesting with however you have this baby planned!! update soon!
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