| "Blood Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: ^_^x Kenshin Speaking
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 14:54 CDT
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I wonder if I can rate Yarisha horribly. Hmmm...Anywho, that for reviewing Neppy and thanks for the site. We checked it out but no one was there.(Go figure.) You'll have to give me a time frame of some sort, and time diffs also. Anyway, glad to see you're still reading (lol) and Yarisha says thank you to everyone who reads her stories! So... Ja ne!
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Title: Blood Neptune
Reviewed By: Blood Neptune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 18:45 CDT
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Wow... ehe, I didn't know you would make reference to my character and Uriel. What makes it interesting is that they were once engaged... anyway, keep up the good work! And Kuronue... you big jerk! How can you treat a girl like that, especially one you dated?! Oh, well... you guys all know that I miss you so very much... I'd do anythingto talk to you again. Oh! That reminds me... http://pub14.bravenet.com/chat/show.php/1140779134 The SSUK Reunion. ^_^ I go there sometimes with mik. If you get the chance, try your best to get there, okay? I love you guys!
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Reviewed By: Blood Neptune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 22:31 CDT
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Great chapter! Why am I thinking romance...? This is PG-13, damn it! Can't have any smutty stuff. >_< Anyway, I look forward to more. Keep up the good work! I miss you all and wish you the best of luck!
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Title: Holy crap!!!
Reviewed By: Blood Neptune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 09:20 CDT
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First off, I loved the chapter. It's nice to know that you gave some background info to your characters. Just to help you on mine in case you're confused, Neptune's mother's real name is Neptune Goddess, but Aya Kenya Neptune could be the name she used when she was helping demons with the war... or something... I dunno. >_< It's early. Secondly, I miss you all soooo much! If you still go to the old chat room, let me know ASAP. My names are probably unregistered from the lack of use, but hey, who's to complain? You guys are awesome, really. I can't wait to read Chapter 8. I love you all!
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Title: Ty, kaja, and neppy-chan!
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 21:38 CST
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^_^ Glad you enjoyed it. Trust in Chapter 7. "Sarasu is..." everyone gets to know and relate to the characters more. That means I have to figure out who's related to who. And here's a hint on Sarasu's relation to two of the characters. Hint: Mother. Okay that was too easy. Ah well, glad you like being related to Youko, Neppy! Thanks for your reviews quys!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 13:17 CST
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love it so far! interesting relationship to Youko, it's great and you need to update soon!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Blood Neptune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 10:23 CST
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Chapter 6 is great! It's good to know that I'm related to Youko. ^_^ I guess I have a lot to discover on my mother's side.
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Title: Sorry!!!
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 20:44 CST
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I realize I haven't updated Chapter 6 in a while but I promise it's coming SOON. I've been real busy with school and such and just haven't had time. Please, please forgive me!
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Reviewed By: Blood Neptune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 17:16 CST
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Nice job with the last chapter, guys. I hope I get to fight soon in this, and that there will be plenty of action in it. Good luck with your next chapter, I hope to read it soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 18:33 CST
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I forgot to thank you two! Oi i'm dull! I'm going to update 5 soon and then the strange chapter 6 will come up! So just give me some time and you'll have your fanfic updates!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 17:20 CST
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i love it! and thanks for reviewing my fics! you keep writing too and update soon! Onegai? Au revoir!
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Reviewed By: Blood Neprune On: November 15, 2004 18:59 CST
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Chapter 5 is a bit short, but I still like it. It's not just because you put my character in it, either; I now have suspense about the story thanks to Sarasu's appearence. I look forward to an update, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Blood Neptune On: October 26, 2004 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're story is great, Yarisha. Very demonic. ^_^ I look forward to reading the other chapters. You gonna mention a certain Neptuain/vampire hybrid in one of them? Lol, you don't have to. You're fan fic is comletely awesome, keep up the good work!
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Title: Just wanted to try
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm! Lets see I just wanted to see my own writing on the reveiws. Tee Hee ^-^. PLZ Someone read and review. *Sniff* I mean it\\\'s so short. Oh well. Several people read the reviews to understand the people\'s opinion. So plz review when you think it will help! Thanks Sayonara!
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