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| "Halloween Party!" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 16:00 EST
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YAY! More action! This is too exciting! You know me well, Daniel-chan! I DO NOT BACK DOWN FROM ANYONE! *LOL* Man I'm running out of words to say. But what I lack in words, I'll give in actions. ^_~
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 12:36 EST
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OMG!!!!! that was hell of a cool chapter!!! this is getting really good and now.....you make an evil cliffhanger.....i think the three fighters had won but,who knows. anyways....plz you have to make more!!! or at least another fic like this. and if u do, you can bet im gonna sign up for it as soon as it comes out,with all of my same bio that i gave u for this story. and 1 more thing, i have read and reviewed ur beaty pegent story with yugi as the judge, and i want you to make more, it is hilarious. cant wait for the epilouge and i hope it is really long. plz update soon. shane.
| Reviewed By: Stary Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 13:55 EST
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Hey! I wanna be in your next story! Keep in touch! E-mail: Kiffaniz@aol.com I.M.: Kiffaniz
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 21:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well,this demon sounds like a good fight,but, i am the MASTER in shadows,if i can gather enough energy within one minute,that monster is toast,all it takes is sixty seconds,i just need some distractions for that time,as soon as i know i gatherd up a hella lot of energy, a swirling giant ball of pitch dark energy capable of destroying anything ,everything and anyone will come raining down from the heavens,at a inhuman speed not even that demon can move away from,when it hits,he will be destroyed and never live against my attack, for it is "DOOMSDAY CRASH!!!" ARMAGEDDON HAS COME FOR THIS TITAN!, however,as soon as the monster is destroyed,i will go unconcious for a few hours to 2 days. please, i beg you,let me kill him with my ultimate move,like i said, it will deroy anything,everything and anyone caught in its radius,which,is the size of a planet. if i make the attack destroy the monster,then i will also have to make my attack also stop from destroying this planet. i will have to time it just right, or earth will be gone. i shall bring down this titan and save earth all at once,but if i use my powers to save earth from the impact to destroy the monster,i will be out for only kami would know. please use this idea so i can bring down that monster, i dont and i wont die just yet,especially with my demon abilities and friends helping me. YOUR TIME HAS COME MONSTER!!!! PREPARE TO MEET YOUR DOOM!!!!
| Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 21:14 EST
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YEAH! Now this is the action I was talking about! You never disappoint me, Daniel-chan! Great going on this chapter! You deserve a reward...Come and get it if you dare...*chuckle*
| Reviewed By: Meira (paralleltodarkness) On: November 01, 2004 20:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-~ I GOT TO JOIN IN THE FIGHT?! AWESOME!!! Anyways, this is really good - keep on writing! I can't wait to see the next chapter! .Meira.
| Reviewed By: Silver Moon Phoenix On: November 01, 2004 20:23 EST
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Luna: I resent my last thought. I'm totally scared! (Huddles with Luna) I'm scared, too. DJ, you have just brought out the movie horror monsters that I fear, and this is GREAT! Luna: You're delusional. I wonder who will survive the game 'til dawn. I wonder, too. Well, let's hope we find out soon.
| Reviewed By: Silver Moon Phoenix On: November 01, 2004 20:17 EST
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Oh, I wonder who else will appear... (Gives mischevious look) Luna: Hikari, you're scaring me... I am. Good. Luna: (Sighs) I think sometimes she forgets I'm the yami and she's the hikari. Well, let's go to the next chapter. I'm eager to find out what will happen!
| Reviewed By: Silver Moon Phoenix On: November 01, 2004 20:11 EST
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Luna: Hikari, what is this basketball? (Sighs) You have a lot to learn, Luna. Luna: Hey, I may be an ancient sorceress, but I still have tricks up my sleeve. Really. Great chapter. Time for the next one!
| Reviewed By: Silver Moon Phoenix On: November 01, 2004 20:00 EST
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Okay, I'm trying to get use to this system of review. Kirby's invited, yeah! Luna: (Sweatdrop) I know it's the day after Halloween, but she was quite busy. You watch Kirby? Yeah, I love it so much! Kirby is so adorable, but second to Yugi in my book! Luna: Let's just move on.
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 18:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when the next chapter comes out,will this story be over or will there be some more chapters? shane.
| Title: U made my cousin cry.....
Reviewed By: K.C. Whitestar On: November 01, 2004 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work DJ, but u made Karen Cry...... not nice now I have to beat the shit out of monsters.... ^________________^ Keep it up^_~
| Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 08:56 EST
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I'm hoping to read more later! This chapter was an incomplete event. I want to see action, kick-ass! WOHOO! Hey, Daniel, would you dance with me? *dances to the music while throwing a few karate moves*
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 20:48 EST
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this is really good, i hope the next chapter is the longest, and, i think eithe me (shane) or deimos will be last one standing,who knows,plus, i cant wait for my treat *perverted grin again* (what do you expect, im 18) plz update soon. shane.
| Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 19:43 EST
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I hope the next chapter will be awsome is because halloween is the best holiday ever!! Well, can I change my costume? I want to wear Morrigan's outfit so Yami can drool all he wants to because he can't resist me!! heehee. I liked everybody's costumes and all sorts of stuff in your fic is because that's what it makes this story very interesting and all. Well, I hope you update soon. Ja ne.
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