Reviewed By: Mika_Kitty666 On: November 11, 2004 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well that was my first Weiss Kreuz fic that I've ever read. Now, here comes the criticism: the next time you decide to write lemon, puh-leeeeze try to make it longer and more describtive. We perverted readers like reading that kind of stuff and would prefer it if you did that (besides you'd get more revies that way)
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