| "Old Friends in Old & New Places" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww that's so sweet!!!
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Reviewed By: aru-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes, youko is a perv. what does kuronue mean by biological kids? is kagome pregnant? please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: aru-inu On: November 26, 2004 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why is youko a perv? so sad. plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!! PLEASE HURRY UP AND MAKE THE OTHER CHAPTERS SOON!!! ^_^ AND MAKE THE PAIRING Youko/KAGOME or Kura/Kag/Kuro
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 12:49 CST
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great chapter only you discription of the battle was kinda weak but you can improve it by adding more discription of each persons battle.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 18:34 CST
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I dunno 'bout everyone else, but I found chapter 3 quite amusing. :D Okay... don't worry, I'm not insane. This chapter seemed a little rushed, but it was good. Go Kuronue! Other than that, I would like to point out a spelling error in your disclaimer. Sorry to sound persnickety, but it's 'YuYu Hakusho' not 'YuYu Hakushow'...
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 15:00 CST
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GREAT! This is really a good fic. I think the pairing should be Kuro/Kagome! Just because he cares for Shippo so much. And also, KEEP WRITING! This fic should be a big hit!!!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: November 20, 2004 13:44 CST
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kawaii.
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Reviewed By: WhiteXRose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 21:12 CST
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Four words.... Hil-ar-i-ous!! Haha, Youko's awesome.... I love his perverted ways... XD And Kuronue the responsible one? Hehe, I like it! NEXT CHAPPIE!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 12:26 CST
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Yay!!!! You updated! ^_^ I find this version of yoko very entertianing but not true. He maybe pervertide but not to your extent but it works for your fic so I aint complaning
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Reviewed By: KAtzztar not signed in On: November 11, 2004 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
X.X Leave it to Kagome to be the first one to notice Naraku's presence. I like the fact she's so protective of Shippo.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: November 11, 2004 14:38 CST
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.... that was unexpected...
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Reviewed By: WhiteXRose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 23:55 CST
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Well, since you updated, I shall give you back Mr. Carrot and Ms. Moo.... *throws them to you* But.... If you don't update again, the wolf gets it!!!! MWAHAHAHA!!!! I loved that chappie, by the way! WRITE MORE DAMN YOU! *looks at Raikuro with an evil grin*
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 16:43 CST
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LOL poor yuoko! I hope he doesn't leave Inu yasha in to much of a mess. lol
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Reviewed By: wachutu On: November 05, 2004 10:37 CST
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enjoyed the new chapters. PLease update soon!!!!!!!!
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