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| "Blinded By Science" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
| Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 04:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Cliffie and plot180' at the same time. Whatever I was expecting, this was NOT it. I mean, I suspected A would have something to do because you mentioned her in the prologue, but NOT like this. Congrats for surprising me, that rarely happens. *bows* Let's see, I enjoyed Shingo's reaction, very gruffy teenager of him. Then there was Ikuko, heh, you caught her well and that bit about the credit card was totally believable. The scene at the bridal shop was very amusing. The use of caps perfectly justifiable and it made me grin. I could totally see Naru screeching at the news. Heh. Gotta love how you caught that small animosity between Naru and Ami, the Senshi and Naru rarely - if ever? - mixed in the anime/manga, so it is nice to see something like this. Besides, it was in character. Naru's enthusiasm vs. Ami's calmness, yup, I bought it. Loved the 'baby Mina-chan' part. lol, adorable.
| Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, this is just lovely. The dialogue is witty and flows rather smoothly. Love the insertion of the Senshi's parents, good thought!
| Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great. I just read Rainy Day Lover i want to see a sequel and I have a great title and it is called Snowy Day Lover. It is were Usagi and Rei have another passion filled night togther.
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