| "Predators and their prey" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: bunny453 On: May 27, 2006 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON YOU FUCKING BITCH!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Malik the Psycho(Too lazy to log in) On: July 07, 2005 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
NYAAAAH! X_X;; UPDATE SOON! PLEAAAASE!
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Reviewed By: forever broken (to lazy to log in) On: June 12, 2005 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god I'm so sorry I just reviewed (had to work full time for 2 weeks O.o so feel sorry for me!!*commands you*) anyhooble! how can you possibly think people wouldn't like your story! it's way to good! (who's dawny btw? ^_^) and yaay people are warming up here *is cold, get's closer wow..it's warm here* and come on seto is way to friendly here.. ehm.. wait.. he isn't anyhooble! let seto get closer to Joey too!! or else it isn't fair! and pwetty please with sugar on top, update really soon!! (you said you would update every month *huge pout*) so pleeeaaaase update very soon now! and ghokay the chapter makes it up..a little!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: June 08, 2005 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*rolls eyes* RA! Yes! I'm afraid of the next part! Pls don't have Yugi, Ryou and Malik sleep with the predators! I don't wnat them to win the bet so soon! If they want their preys, they WILL have to work for it! Pls have them grovel! Especially Seto! What's with all the dog comments? He reminds me of Severus Snape from Harry Potter! Only Snape's completely heartless! Even Seto NEVER went as far to mind-rape his enemy's relatives! Much less bully Serenity! Seto's got more heart than Snape! At least he cares for Mokuba! I'm not sure about Seto ever killing anyone, the manga had Gozaburo commit suicide. But the anime never was exactly clear on gozaburo's fate!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: April 06, 2005 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* Loved the comeback! *pauses* But bets such as these have a way of back-firing! What if they fall in love and the truth comes out? Everyone's bound to get hurt! Anyway, how will Malik get Marik back to normal? And what's Malik's plan? *arches eyebrows* Malik likes bad boys? *shakes head* He's a screwball!
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Reviewed By: forever broken [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whieej.. great chapter! I really love it! I love it that the nerds are making a come back ^^ but eventually they will all fall in love will they? *puppy dog eyes* and geez.. it took you way to long to update this chapter! (please update really soon *angelface*) bye! *waves at screen* see you at msn!
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Reviewed By: forever broken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 01:31 CST
Comment/Review:
wow.. great.. I don't think I've reviewt jet.. but I can't remember... *thinks* nope really can't remember! geez I'm so stupid sometimes! well.. please update REAAALLLY soon! and btw I totally agree with Shinigami24 they shouldn't win the bet that easy! well..gotta go.. to the hell called school! bye bye *waves at screen*
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: February 22, 2005 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please have Malik give Marik fits by acting OOC, like swearing at him. Cuz I SO would enjoy seeing Marik off guard...And maybe then he wouldn't call Malik perky then! As for Ryou, I would enjoy seeing Bakura screw up and Ryou slap him more...As for Isis, she can always go in a place that Mai wouldn't dare go in. Such as the boys's bathroom, or one of Isis and friends's local hangouts...Gomen nasai, but I don't want Marik and Co to win the bet so easily!
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Reviewed By: chibi one On: November 30, 2004 18:25 CST
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I'm liking this fic so far. Please update soon. It's reeeeallly interesting. Or I'll be forced to unleash a rabid tenracle monster I keep in my closet on you.
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: November 21, 2004 11:13 CST
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GREAT!! I LOVED it. Yay!! Ryou slapped BAKU, will Baku get Ryou to talk? Malik is QUITE insane, I MUST say, defininitly deserves the title mister perky.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 12:36 CDT
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Hey its me Velvetina! Glad to see that you've put this up, I love it so far!
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