| "Broken Smile" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww ^^ cute descriptions in the start ^^ And so sad.... poor Kira! I like the way that it is written from his POV (sorry for the short hand), it makes it very much more effective than it would have been potentialy otherwise ^-^ Ever all, very cute, very nicely done ^-^
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Title: story
Reviewed By: silly kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
adorable! made me want to kick cagollie! and replace her with kira!its hard to find a good fanfic whith kira liking athren or visa versa. this was wonderful! plz write more like this!
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 02:43 CST
Comment/Review:
i'd say angsty. that's like the definition of angsty oneshot. very good, albeit sad
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: MoonFoxChild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good...kinda sad but very good!!! ^_^ Great Job!
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