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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 21:13 CST
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This was a great chapter. And just to ease your mind about your lemon. I think it was great. I think that no matter how Sesshoumaru had seemed to really want to go hard. He learned to enjoy the slow and passionate way. But now Kagome can express much more her enjoyment. So don't worry about is. I love all the 'family' moments. They were really great. Oh and I love your OC's. Each is well done. Keep going, and update soon.
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Title: BRAVO!!!!
Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS TRULY THE MOST WONDERFUL, HEARTWRENCHING STORY THAT I HAVE READ IN A WHILE. I LOVE IT. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER (OR ANY MORE I WOULD LOVE IT). THANK YOU.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 01:10 CST
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This brought lots of tears. Very well written. Loved every part. Can't wait for more of this. I know you have some more chapters. Please update this great story soon.
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Reviewed By: Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I\'m just...stunned...That was such a powerfull story (just finished chapter 20, hope you write more) So far this story and how you write and...just everything is so powerfull! I totally recommend this story to everyone as a must read. (though a few words caught me off guard, guess I should brush up on my Japanese [Anime expressions and the like], I only know the basics, forgive my ignorance! Baka baka baka) Well as I said this was great and I\'ll be checking to see if you continue this story. This story was simply utsukushii (beautiful...i think) Gomen nasai...I will stop ranting now...GAH!!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 01:27 CST
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I had a feeling you were setting them up for this. Just the idea of Miroku groping girls and her not saying or doing anything was a sure sign. I think they will be happy. And Kagome gets to have her 'sister' for a long time. That in and of itself is important. Can't wait for more. Oh, and what will become of Miroku?
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 19:44 CST
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Wow, what a great couple of chapters! Kikyou got it kind of harsh, but I guess that's what you get for being a royal b*tch. Is she gonna show her face in the village, trying to get back in people's good graces? I never read an Inuyasha/Sango pairing before, but I have to say that I really enjoyed it. What is Miroku gonna have to say about all this?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Nice ending for the chapter! LOL!! I like InuYasha/Sango pairings! Thanks!!!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just found your fic and I love it. It has so much yummy emotion in it! And I am not a Kikyou fan so any story where she isn't liked I love-LOL. I hope to read more soon... it really is great. You have a very nice talent for joining the words just right so that a person can really "picture" the story. I hope you keep it up.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupid Kouga! I love your story! Can you write another lemon in the next chapter, please!! And thanks for the great story!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, talk about 'party time'! Please update soon! well love ya bye-bye!!
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this unusual twist on this Kag/Sess fic. It caught me by surprise. I'm very interested in what happens now that he has mated her and cared for her. Also, it will be interesting to see what occurs now that the Jewel has fused with Kagome's lifeforce and everyone is dead.
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Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? When I first read this fic, I was not expecting much but now I am glad I stuck with it. Many times before I have seen a Sess/Kag pairing but after a while they get too cliché and the writer does not say what happens to the others. You, not only said what happened to the others, you brought the jewel into the fic as well. I have read my fair of fics and not once, have I read one where they actually included Midoriko in it. Well one other but I can not remember the title. You explained the nature of the jewel and brought about the history. And you proved that it was Kikyo's fault in the beginning. THAT is one of the many reasons I never liked her. You are, by far, one of my favorite writers. And right now, leaving Kikyo forced to live her \'ordinary life\' without a voice? I'm sure she will make some dirt poor, horny asshole happy. A pretty woman to be his salve and she will never be able to talk back to him or will never be heard. Good riddance!! *spits on ground* I think that is the best damn punishment for her instead of death. Okay this is getting a bit long. I hope you condition this story soon! I also hope that Kagome will get better soon. Question, are you going to bring Kouga in just for a brief appearance? I mean the guy loves her! Well maybe not like Sess does but he does care about her. Just a thought. Bye for now! On a last note, the score should be infinity on the enjoyment factor.
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Title: all '10'
Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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You got ride of Kikyo! It's about time somebody set her straight!
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story, hope that you can update it soon!!
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow....amazing story...i cried when i found out everyone died....>_< but anyway so far its kept me hooked to reading it..so update again soon!!
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