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Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? When I first read this fic, I was not expecting much but now I am glad I stuck with it. Many times before I have seen a Sess/Kag pairing but after a while they get too cliché and the writer does not say what happens to the others. You, not only said what happened to the others, you brought the jewel into the fic as well. I have read my fair of fics and not once, have I read one where they actually included Midoriko in it. Well one other but I can not remember the title. You explained the nature of the jewel and brought about the history. And you proved that it was Kikyo's fault in the beginning. THAT is one of the many reasons I never liked her. You are, by far, one of my favorite writers. And right now, leaving Kikyo forced to live her \'ordinary life\' without a voice? I'm sure she will make some dirt poor, horny asshole happy. A pretty woman to be his salve and she will never be able to talk back to him or will never be heard. Good riddance!! *spits on ground* I think that is the best damn punishment for her instead of death. Okay this is getting a bit long. I hope you condition this story soon! I also hope that Kagome will get better soon. Question, are you going to bring Kouga in just for a brief appearance? I mean the guy loves her! Well maybe not like Sess does but he does care about her. Just a thought. Bye for now! On a last note, the score should be infinity on the enjoyment factor.
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Title: all '10'
Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You got ride of Kikyo! It's about time somebody set her straight!
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story, hope that you can update it soon!!
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow....amazing story...i cried when i found out everyone died....>_< but anyway so far its kept me hooked to reading it..so update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: Tiger Lily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Sango!!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 23:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
As always, what a great update. Sango was awsome. I could just see her going off on Kikyou for real. Thanks again for the great story. Can\'t wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!! Please keep up the great work!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update gosh damn it, it was getting good and then you go and end it. GRRRRRRR update as soon as you can cause it was getting good. LOVED IT A LOT UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN. Ja Ne Airy
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Title: Awsome!!
Reviewed By: Tiger Lily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your portrayal of Sesshoumaru and his concern for Kagome is so kawaii! Please please please update soon!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap! I hope they put Kikyo through hell because she's getting on my nerves and I can't stand her anymore!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love it!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! I like the direction you are going with Kagome's state of mind after years of 'you're not good enough' from Inuyasha. Please keep up the story, I look forward to it
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is getting better! Hopefully she\\\'ll stop being a zombie soon. Great chaps! One more thing, what happened to Rin?
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Though I hate to see Kagome so broken, while I was reading I kept forgetting it was her. I hope Kagome gets out of that broken state soon cause its really depressing. I hope you update real soon, love your story! ^-^
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 20:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a great story! Please keep going, I want to find out exactly what happened
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