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Reviewed By: diabloangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 09:41 CST
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I loved the whole story. Yes i would have liked to gottne more informatino on her future, but i can understand when the story says no. I am alos reading You Darkness i am enjoying it very much. Please keep up with the good work.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 20:45 CST
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More children on the way. My they are going for the big family. Good for them. Poor Kikyo, couldn't even find a somewhat nice person, could she. Well, I am going to watch out for your other story, until then, later.
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Reviewed By: akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 18:55 CST
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its hard to believe its over. such a great story, maybe one day you'll have the inspiration for a sequal.
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Reviewed By: clavira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 06:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really enhoy(ed) reading each chapter of your story, although it was really dark in the beginnning; just wanted to let you know that i like it ;p Well, anyway, I never understood, what "koy/koishi" meant; would you care to explain, please? I´m german speaking, english´s my 2nd language, so bear with me...
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 21:13 CST
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This was a great chapter. And just to ease your mind about your lemon. I think it was great. I think that no matter how Sesshoumaru had seemed to really want to go hard. He learned to enjoy the slow and passionate way. But now Kagome can express much more her enjoyment. So don't worry about is. I love all the 'family' moments. They were really great. Oh and I love your OC's. Each is well done. Keep going, and update soon.
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Title: BRAVO!!!!
Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS TRULY THE MOST WONDERFUL, HEARTWRENCHING STORY THAT I HAVE READ IN A WHILE. I LOVE IT. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER (OR ANY MORE I WOULD LOVE IT). THANK YOU.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 01:10 CST
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This brought lots of tears. Very well written. Loved every part. Can't wait for more of this. I know you have some more chapters. Please update this great story soon.
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Reviewed By: Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I\'m just...stunned...That was such a powerfull story (just finished chapter 20, hope you write more) So far this story and how you write and...just everything is so powerfull! I totally recommend this story to everyone as a must read. (though a few words caught me off guard, guess I should brush up on my Japanese [Anime expressions and the like], I only know the basics, forgive my ignorance! Baka baka baka) Well as I said this was great and I\'ll be checking to see if you continue this story. This story was simply utsukushii (beautiful...i think) Gomen nasai...I will stop ranting now...GAH!!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 01:27 CST
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I had a feeling you were setting them up for this. Just the idea of Miroku groping girls and her not saying or doing anything was a sure sign. I think they will be happy. And Kagome gets to have her 'sister' for a long time. That in and of itself is important. Can't wait for more. Oh, and what will become of Miroku?
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 19:44 CST
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Wow, what a great couple of chapters! Kikyou got it kind of harsh, but I guess that's what you get for being a royal b*tch. Is she gonna show her face in the village, trying to get back in people's good graces? I never read an Inuyasha/Sango pairing before, but I have to say that I really enjoyed it. What is Miroku gonna have to say about all this?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Nice ending for the chapter! LOL!! I like InuYasha/Sango pairings! Thanks!!!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just found your fic and I love it. It has so much yummy emotion in it! And I am not a Kikyou fan so any story where she isn't liked I love-LOL. I hope to read more soon... it really is great. You have a very nice talent for joining the words just right so that a person can really "picture" the story. I hope you keep it up.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupid Kouga! I love your story! Can you write another lemon in the next chapter, please!! And thanks for the great story!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, talk about 'party time'! Please update soon! well love ya bye-bye!!
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this unusual twist on this Kag/Sess fic. It caught me by surprise. I'm very interested in what happens now that he has mated her and cared for her. Also, it will be interesting to see what occurs now that the Jewel has fused with Kagome's lifeforce and everyone is dead.
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