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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took me two days to finish your story, but i absolutley loved it. you're an extremely talented writer, and your storyline was so unique. i also enjoy reading alternate pairing fics, but inu/kag are still my favorite. this was so well written and beleivable that i can definitely respect the pairing. i saw that you have another fic that isn't yet completed, so i guess i'll move on to that one. btw, i think it's really cool that you're a guy, seeing how the majority of writers are female. it's nice to get a new perspective. keep up the good work. (sorry my compliment isn't too original) U_U
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Title: Unworthy One
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 01:45 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:28 CDT
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wow, definitely on the dark side, but as a whole has a very enlightening psychological side. great to see you take a different perspective on the situation and add some new elements. definite fav!
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my. As always I love your writing. But I dont like the story... *cringes as she expects rocks to be thrown* I'm sorry but im a canon fanatic. But this is the only actual non-canon story that i have ever read that has had skill behind it. So props for great style, vocab and skill. It was intriguing but still im a stupid lil fan girl who is stuck on the standard Inu/Kag, San/Mir and Sess/Kagu pairings. I know i know... Im a dork. I cant wait to read more of your stuff! so keep up the good work. ~Kat
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Title: Unworthy One
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 16:59 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Woo Hoo!
Reviewed By: zrofyre [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic! It is so wonderful, and true. You express the char exactly as I imagined them, and even though it is a sess/kag you don't make inuyasha out to be a total ass, because eventually he realizes and works to make up for it. you had me in tears at the end, absolute sobbing! It was so emotional and took me so many places, I absolutley love it!
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 04:30 CST
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wow, alot of emotions in this fic. i have to say out of your fics, this one is my favorite. you are a very talented writer and i look forward to reading your future works. i hope you continue to write many more fics to share with all of us.
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Title: Loved it.
Reviewed By: jeremyhfht [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 07:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read alot, also take the time to examin the story itself. Your story is one of the very few I truely admire. That being the case I give you a 10 in all aspects (altho the spelling was a little off but we all make mistakes). As to anyone who gives this story of near perfict plot, twists, and pure fun in reading it I'll personally grab your throught and strangle you in mid air like the dog demon does to jawkin. I however am not a fan of lemon fics but I wont hold that agenst you. I admire the fact you try to please all "crowds". True overall rating: 11 out of 10 (hehe).
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Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story it was so beatiful and very long. i love stories that are long because i like to read a lot. and most of all i like kagome and sesshomaru stories. i think it was kind of messed up what you did to kikyo not that i like her anywase but still. your stor was great.
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Title: Amazing.
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually hate Shesso/Kag fics but your twist on it made it really enjoyable. (One picky detail, it's bear children not bare.)
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story. Love love love it. I keep reading and rereading it cause I just enjoy it that much. *gush* *gush* *gush*
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Reviewed By: Hentai Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really suprised to find a fic of such quality with such an unappealing name and summary. Once I got over the initial chapters I was glad that I reserved my judgement till the end. This is a very interesting and well written fic. I stayed up all night until 7:30 in the morning just so I could finish reading it. And all in all it was worth it.
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Reviewed By: monkey face89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best stories ever!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 17:07 CST
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Wow,that was a Great story - Very unique
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 01:21 CST
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This was a great fic. I loved your writeing stlye and the story line was wonderful. I do wonder what happened to Miroku though. I feel a bit sad for him(a bit). I am VERY happy for Kikyou though I'm so glad she got her wish (evil laughter) 'Orion
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