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Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 13:05 CDT
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I love your story. Please keep it up. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Title: Ummm HEY!
Reviewed By: Sintar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to ask if you were going to update this great story!!! Please do soon k!! ~Sintar
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Title: Rabid Anime Gurl
Reviewed By: RabidAnimeGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story started off wonderfully, and I was anxious to continue reading. But after the even between Sesshoumaru, Alina, and Rin, the whole plot just began to nose dive. In the beginning, you captured my interests with a great characterization of Rin and the interesting, and personal connection she seemed to have to Sesshoumaru. They finally get together, and then thats just seems to be the end of their story. You throw in lemons about characters that have no real central part in the plot - they are just there for the sake of being there. As the story became progressively less and less about Rin and Sesshoumaru, I found myself skipping entire sections of chapters. Bottom line, the story was meant to be about Sesshoumaru and Rin from the beginning and I find it severely disappointing, since the beginning was so beautifully written, that the story just seemed to slowly crash and burn. On another note, the formatting is crazy, as other people have noted. Its difficult to read and I actually got a headache trying to separate paragraphs and lines. Try to fix that. This is not a flame, just constructive criticism from one fellow writer to another. I really enjoyed the BEGINNING of the chapter, the first 4 or 5 chapters. But as it progressed it seems as though you were updating for the sake of updating - not to continue a plot flow. You have great potential to make the story much better than what it has come to be. -Rabid Anime Gurl
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Title: Great Story!!
Reviewed By: Sintar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this!!! I hope you update soon!!!
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Title: Washuu Ogami
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 08:48 CST
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Extremely enjoyable! I'm hoping Sesshomaru and Rin will be reconciled soon, though. Thanks for the great ride thus far--your OC's are marvelously written.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 03:41 CST
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HA!! KNEW she was preggo! K, but now I'm wondering what's going on with the whole "soul bond" thing.. and what happened at the trial.. how Sessy's doing... Tell me!!!
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Reviewed By: mageofthebooksOlivia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kind of saw the pregnancy thing coming, but thats a given I mean I just can't imagen demons as not having strong anything thats what they are right? Strong! So they would of course impregnant easily. Thats the only thing I've kind of seen coming to this point and I'm really enjoying this. Even if its hard to read it because its not formated. All the words and lines blur a little to me when their not formated. Please write for soon! ^__^
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: marta178-not signed in as usual On: January 22, 2005 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE don't stop updating your fanfiction here Please!!!!! It's one of my favourits and I would be very sad if you would stop ;_; As usual This chappy was great, but I feel sorry for sesshou and rin, they are going to meet again soon aren't they?? And most important because she is pregnant and suffering!! And sesshoumaru doesn't seen able to locate her :'( You must update soon!!! I can die of an heart attack not knowing what is going to happen!!
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Reviewed By: marta 178 On: December 07, 2004 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
only one word to descrive it - WOW !! Hope you keep updating and don't give up on this story! I love it so much! It's so original! I liked the mating scene but like it was said before there seems to be a problem with the chapter's formate it cuts the beggining of the sentences :'( Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: mageofthebooks On: December 07, 2004 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
theres something wrong with your formating here, if you look you'll see it plainly esspecially with the last few pages. I love the story though really really love the story, just a problem with the formating of the most recent chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: KimC On: November 22, 2004 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you will update soon I really liked your story and I am looking forward to more chapters.
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Reviewed By: KimC On: November 20, 2004 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more on this I love your story it is very well written. i look forware to reading more of it in the future.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, it's gettin' hot in here, so hot, so take off all your clothes... now we're smoking!!!
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Title: *^__^*
Reviewed By: marta178_not signed in On: November 18, 2004 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow wow wow!! That lady is just as bad as a snake! Sesshoumaru went and 'is going to'(
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Title: cnat' wait for the next update
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly loved the updates and all the new chapters. Alina is a good villain. I can't wait to see what happens next. Good job with descriptions and setting. You should have more reviews than this (espec. since I've seen some lousy fan fics with poor grammar, spelling, content etc. with loads of reviews)-
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Reviewed By: SessRin Fan On: November 11, 2004 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! For my sanity! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: marta178-not signed in On: November 11, 2004 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapy!! but may i say smaller than the others ;_; so you must update sooner!! ^________^ *peace*
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Reviewed By: mikeslikb [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 13:00 CST
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I like the way u think and I even like that Rin/Sesshomaru pairing! Update I want to see how this all plays out! Anyways please check out my fics!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually only read the kag/inu fics, but yours has drawn me in completely. Will Inu's gang be making an appearance? In any case, I can't wait to see what happens with Rin and Sess!
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Reviewed By: mageofthebooks On: November 06, 2004 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so very much enjoying this, a interesting new kind of IY fic. I have not come across anything similar to this. Please continue soon! I am lovin it! ^)^
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Reviewed By: Susanne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 14:41 CDT
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This looks like a very promising story, I hope to see updates soon :o) Normally I'm not very fond of OCs but yours seem believable and interesting. Keep going! A very minor detail: when you talked about the High Courtesans coming at the end of Chapter 2, you probably meant Courtiers...I can't really picture Sesshoumaru in an orgy ;o)
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Reviewed By: marta178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fluff :3 Sexxhoumaru finally told her what she was, the Lady of his house...the no mete thing...poor sesshou-kun.... o^___^o she told him that she didn't regected him *_*
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Title: ^__________^
Reviewed By: marta178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go You! Go you! XD I love your 1st chapter! Hope you update soon!! and of course don't leave us hanging mutch longer! Your story is very adictive(sp?) It make us want to read more!! The new character, sesshoumaru's general, Atoki, is simply marvelous!!
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story and I'm a big Rin and Sess fan so it works. I also like the original characters you have added to the story. Will Inuyasha and the others make an appearance in this story? Please update soon. It has an excellent start and the lemon was quite good. I enjoy your setting and the details you've worked into the content.
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Fire_star_mistress85 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story so far. Love the summary too! Not too many people around here can do good summaries.
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