| "Lady Orange Blossom" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: V On: December 13, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there, just wanted to say please add another chapter soon, I'm really into the story. So please add another chapter soon, onegai, please keep up the great work and add another chapter soon. Thanks ^_^...
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Reviewed By: SessRin Fan On: November 09, 2004 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Update ASAP! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie/rage2velvet not signed in On: November 08, 2004 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad that you've updated. I really enjoyed reading the last 2 chapters. Especially since you formatted chapter four this time! Much easier to read and it helps with the flow of the story when reading. You should have more reviews for this story-I am going to recommend this story in my A/N when I post my story this week. I can't wait until Rin and Sesshoumaru meet! I also liked that you added the small detail of Sesshoumaru kissing Rin goodbye, and the lovely haiku, and the explanation of female youkai having a hard time surviving birth (which would explain what happened to his own mother).
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not signed in) On: November 08, 2004 10:19 CST
Comment/Review:
great story......please continue. I need them to meet.....Let Sesshomaru fall in love again with her....and Sano die!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: October 25, 2004 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this story on FF.net and I would love for you to continue. I've read books about women in the pleasure quarters of Japan (and you do an excellent historical job of disguishing the difference between a courtesan and a geisha)-It makes sense that you would make Rin a courtesan because she would be too old to be a geisha and she had no one to mentor her. I look forward to the rest of this story and I enjoyed the twist with Shutaro not being who I thought- I'm sure this story was too explicit for FF.net though- My only complaint is the formatting of the story makes it hard to read and you don't use quotation marks when the characters are speaking, and the paragraphs run together and need to be spaced properly for a fan fic story.
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