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| "Going Under" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: RAGA On: April 27, 2009 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the second horror (I guess one it can be called that) fanfiction I've read and it's one of the best stories I've read. I don't usually like horror but this is definitely something I'd enjoy reading again and again.
| Title: LQ
Reviewed By: tLQ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling, grammar and writing were among some of the best I've seen. I honestly could find no bovious flaw except a couple of misplaced commas and even then, I could be wrong about those. For the overall fic, while hauntings are a bit of an overused plot device, you kept it fresh with the nice little twist that had even me going "Holy cow!!". The kicker though, was the end. I can usually figure out endings to stories but this threw me for a complete loop. I was expecting something totally different and the last lines, what Akira reveals, hit me hard and left me holding back the tears. Bravo to you.
| Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a *wonderful* story!! You managed to tell a riveting story, whilst seamlessly weaving in the main Hikaru nG plot elements, namely, the rivalry, and Shindou's complicated feelings for Sai. And *without* belabouring the point. Sai's help, and Shindou's reaction, had me shedding tears. Very touching. And, to my mind, both the romance and the thriller worked extremely well. Touya's feelings for Shindou were evident in every action. Any extra lemoniness would have been redundant, and probably inappropriate, bearing in mind their unnerving situation. And the ghost story had me on the edge of my seat. It was a very satisfyingly chilling thriller. Spooky!!! I liked that the clues were there for us to puzzle it out with Touya, not just have it all explained to us by some oracular figure at the end. *Really* well done. I enjoyed this very much; as I have all your stories. THanks so much for sharing it with us!^_^
| Reviewed By: ^_^melanie On: March 11, 2005 11:11 CST
Comment/Review:
That was beautiful! I don't think the relationship between Touya and Hikaru seemed rushed, at least not to me. I'm completely new to the HnG fandom, so I'm glad I've already found a good fanfic. I think I'll go read some of your WK now...
| Reviewed By: Dephanie On: November 10, 2004 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't find the thing that would fit with this. Perhaps the 'flow' of the story would fit with style of writing...? But I'm rather fond of your style though, so that wasn't it either. Whatever it is, it was an excellent story. I was SO glad you didn't make this a Shindou suicide fic. Those were getting old, and this definitely wasn't. Shindou's and Akira's relationship felt a bit rushed though...definitely not as good as your first two Hikago fics. My favorite is still "The Right Moves". Anyways, awesome story, and I'm always looking forward to more Hikago fics written by you. You're always good about updating and finishing stories...I love it! Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: harmony glory On: November 04, 2004 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, wonderful story. I absolutely loved it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. :)
| Reviewed By: frostywonder On: October 29, 2004 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! This fanfic is making me really edgy; you know, that tense nervousness in your chest? Wow. I think you are doing an amazing job with this. The interaction between Touya and Hikaru is a little fast, but good nonetheless and it helped ease the fic along instead of making it boring with repetition so wonderful job with that. I am incredibly curious as to what is up with the "ghost." I will be keeping a watch on this for whenever you update, whether it be five days from now or five years! ^^
| Reviewed By: Forsaken (too tired to login) On: October 25, 2004 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. You've so reeled me in with just this one chapter. I'm totally hooked! Great idea, great set up... just wonderful writing. I love Hikago and it's great to see a well written fic enter the fandom; they are so rare nowadays. I really hope the next part comes out soon!
| Reviewed By: Jamalyn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude. This fanfic made me jumpy. Very good. I can't wait to see what happens next and I cannot be sure that the fic won't have me jumping at my own shadows. I love a good scare...
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