| "Ghosts in the Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: evil_neno [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 00:43 CDT
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Very well written, and certainly the single most canon one shot I've ever seen for Inuyasha. Praise be to you, and if you have any other works, at all, I'll be sure to check them out. I also appreciate your explaination of Japanese words you used at the bottom of the page. Although most of them have become familiar, I've never seen anyone be so kind as to give translation. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Ochiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:37 CDT
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Aww... That was really sweet. I never really liked the thought of Inu Yasha being sexually experienced, and I liked the way you portrayed both he and Kagome. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i also think if anyone would have the sexual advantage, it'd be kagome... what with sex ed and all that. and given inuyasha's personality, i think your portrayal was quite acurate. nice job. i enjoyed this so much.
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Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 01:18 CST
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wow...amazing...for once i can't think of anything to type...except...HOLY CRAPPPP!!! JA NE!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 21:14 CST
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That was awesome! I always figured Kagome would have to be the one to make the first move because after all she has been adored by her family all her life while Inuyasha... well you know that. I also like that "it" was bit awkward though it might have been more so.
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Reviewed By: Neeks On: November 10, 2004 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like. I like *lots*. The whole fic had a warm serenity to it; just perfect for wintertime. I was expecting pregnant Sango to be a whole lot less mellow, but then again, you know these characters better than I do. ;P
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Reviewed By: Neeks On: November 10, 2004 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like. I like *lots*. The whole fic had a warm serenity to it; just perfect for wintertime. I was expecting pregnant Sango to be a whole lot less mellow, but then again, you know these characters better than I do. ;P
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 26, 2004 09:11 CDT
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I quite liked it. It slightly annoys me how lemon fanics almost always have the characters go "all the way" immediately. Kagome is a modern teenager, a japanese one at that. (Henti media capitol of the world and country of origin of all the best vibrators) I hate it when she's as ignorant of sex as some mennonite chick from upper New York state. Kagome knows what to do, and I doubt that Inuyasha's seen much except animals mating.
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Reviewed By: smittin kittin(nlo) On: October 26, 2004 01:54 CDT
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wow! beautifuly writen...i'm awed by the scene u set for this romantic interlude. i can't call what i just read a lemon...it was far to intimate 2 be catigorised as such! Thanks 4 sharing this indearing story of first sexual encounters! smooches kittin ^_^
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 23:26 CDT
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I really hope you post a sequel or another chapter at least. This was beautiful! Thanks for sharing it with us!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 16:12 CDT
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well written! i enjoyed it!
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