| "The Heart Says in Silence, What it Fears to Say Aloud" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 05:18 CDT
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OH MY GOD!! you people can't keep doing this to us readers! Every time i find a story worth reading and not criticizing, they stop right in the middle when the story has developed all the necessary components to enthrall a reader: a plot, enemy (new and old), characters personalities, suspense, and last but not least an inner love story!!! dear lord! will anyone out there finish a good story?! i have found stories that go on for hundreds of pages filled with random crap... they write these stories but they play all of their cards in the beginning. Like Inuyasha and Kagome proclaiming their love for one another in chapter ten when there are eighty-nine chapters! your story is great even though it's short it's to the point! theres no random filler like going into intricate detail how the day goes just so you can have a thirty page chapter. well.... soap box be damned I'll never get to read the rest of this story. I'll just put it in the back of my mind and hope maybe you'll come out of whatever funk you are in to give us the rest of this glorious epic novel.
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Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 02:53 CDT
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Hi! Why don't you update your story? I like it so much, please, pretty please!
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Title: write
Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The title is so beautiful, is it a quotation? Please,update!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK, SO AMAZING! UPDATE!
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Title: yum-yum!
Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER, On: February 02, 2005 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! That was wonderfully written, and I'm utterly captivated. Please update soon, so I can see how Inu and Kagome further develop their relationship!!
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Title: !
Reviewed By: PyroPride007 On: January 24, 2005 21:26 CST
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OMG that stort was SO good, i almost died- i have one favor to ask... PLEASE write an epilog or something? it was really really good, thanks for the contribution to good fan fics out there....
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 22:26 CST
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i luv this fic! plz update
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: November 27, 2004 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This story is really beautiful. I teared in many parts of this story. It's so emotional. I truely enjoy the quotes too. They definitly set the mood for what's going on. Please finish this story! It's too good to leave unfinished!
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 09:01 CST
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I realy love this story I hope you up date soon.
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Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wont to know how it all comes out plez write more
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Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 00:40 CST
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This is a really sweet story... filled with angst. I love how the story moves. Good work. :) Joy
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: November 02, 2004 17:10 CST
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I've been reading this since you first posted it and I like it so far. However, Kagome doesn't seem to be 'sealing her feelings' for Inuyasha at all. Is she just going to let him hurt her again? 'Just curious because she went from being barely civil to him (right after she came back from Kouga) to being almost normal with him very fast. Please continue because I'm interested to see what happens next. Thanks, and please update soon. :-)
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 03:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really like what you've got going on here... very good and very well written. You got me hooked! So here I sit eagerly awaiting your next update ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: LadyMiaka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! an update already?! Awesome... You should update like this all of the time. Great chapter... it's awesome to see that Inuyasha is jealous, but I'm glad Kagome didn't try to make him jealous. I think you keep the characters in canon pretty gosh darn well. I'll be checking back later. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 23:47 CDT
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I really like what you have written so far and I hope to see an update very soon! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: LadyMiaka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job so far. There's not much to the story, yet... but I will definitely be back to read more whenever you get an update. I think you're doing an awesome job so far and I hope this encourages you to write more. I know that mm.org people don't leave reviews most of the time, but I hope you continue, lack of reviews or not. I'll be waiting for more! Good luck!
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