| "It Wasn't Supposed To Be Like This" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 29, 2005 10:30 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG UI love this story its great and i can't wait to see what happends to Kag so update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 05:51 CST
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0,0' This is getting interesting… Please continue on… Will she fall for the sexy evil dark hottie??
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Reviewed By: virlour On: November 16, 2004 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea of a naraku/kagome fic very much, but I do not at all like your original characters. They both scream mary sue -- powerful, beautiful, tragic -- and they are overpowering the cannon characters. I think you could have pulled this one off without making 'super demon girls'. JMO
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Title: 'It Wasn't Supposed To Be Like This'
Reviewed By: YoukaiNMe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 04:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank-you for updating!! I hope you keep writing, this story is very interesting.. Ohh cant wait to see how Kagome reacts to a sexy evil Naraku!!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 18:02 CDT
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as ive said b4 this is kewl. ur a great writer n i anticipate the next chpt. -^_^- Cat
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 19:53 CDT
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mesa likey very much. i like naraku hes kewl. i only hate kikyo evry1 else rox
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Title: uh.....
Reviewed By: Soul_Eater_94 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 16:28 CDT
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i don't think i'm going to rate this (waste of time), but i do like the general idea of this... ^_^....KEEP WRITING!!!
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Reviewed By: youkainme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 05:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this idea!! Im always looking for Naraku stories!
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