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Title: An accident
Reviewed By: TheFabledCat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far. I ran across it by accident and I am so glad that I did. I hope that you update soon I want to know what happens next! I can't wait!
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Title: WoW
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 23:00 CST
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Thank you all so much for the reviews! Keep em up!
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Reviewed By: celesvictoria007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 16:32 CST
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More! More! I must have more! Great story so far, update as fast as you want! ;)
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 15:56 CST
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I like your story and I hope to read another chapter soon! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 14:08 CST
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this is friken funny! i cant wait till next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Graciestanton On: October 31, 2004 09:57 CST
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whao!!!!!!! awsome... i love it! i love inuyasha's personality... keep him niceish!!! thank you sooooo much for updating!!!!! keep it up! (Whoa that was lame)lol
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Reviewed By: MyogaM36 On: October 31, 2004 08:25 CST
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I love your story! Please update as soon as you can!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 07:38 CST
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=D
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 02:21 CST
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PAIR HIM WITH ME !!! no j/k haha but they really are gross ... awh nasstyy but anyway Seshsoumaru has a nice car though .. and a sexy body .. lol ok ill stop haha. I liked this chapter a lot update soon !
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reviewing again, why? Cause I used up all of the characters... anways if anyone ever says something like that again... that your characters are OOC, then remember what I wrote in the last review... Because of it being an AU does not mean they have to have the same exact personality... sides it's only the beginning of your story... one should make such a judgment untill they read a bit more where it has Inuyasha when he is not with, near, or thinking of Kagome... cause like you said in your story he had developed a shyness around the opposite sex..... anyways I truly hope that I have not offended anyone, nor tick anyone off I am merely stating my own opinion, one that I am not forcing you to agree with... I really love your story and your new take on their relationship.... eagerly awaiting your next chapter ~Zonza P.S. Sorry for the overly long review... I hope that it wasn't too annoying to read....
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Grins* Awe really ^_^ makes me feel as nice and warm inside! Great chapter by the way, it's really cute! I just wanted to say in an AU fic you can't really write Inuyasha or any of the characters realy OOC becuase the situations and cercumstances of the anime do not apply in AU life because there they do not exist. Unless of course you give them the same background or a simular backround, then yes their personality could very well be the same. The events surrounding ones life creates the personality of that person. I'll use Inuyasha as an example: He grew up rejected by both races, living on his own at a young age and having to fight for his life on a daily bacis and thus grew to show no other emotions really other then anger and arrogance, and shows trust to no one. He used these emotions as a ruse to hide the hurt and pain that he's carried with him all of his life. The little years he spent with his mother did keep him with a soft heart, but was barracaded by years of stone from later events in his life. If look from the first ep. to the much later one you'll notice a drastic change in his attitude. This is because of Kagome's influence upon him, and those of his friends. If he never knew his mother, if his parents were never lost or if he never found Kagome he could very be a completly different person then he is now. It all depends of cerimstances of ones life... I hope that I have not offened anyone with this piece, it is only my opinion and you do not have to head it! |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 00:46 CDT
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Hey! Sorry if I have to keep reviewing to my own story, but it's the only way I can see the reviews!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 20:36 CDT
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I think that there is alot of sugary sweetness in this story. Inuyasah is very OOC; sometimes it is okay to change the personality of a character when you are doing an AU story, but something this dramatic is usually unappreciated by 'purists' or by people who get ticked off by it. But they do have a point. If you are going to change their characters so they only thing they have in common with the original is their gender and their name, then you might as well write a story of Fictionpress.com using your own characters.
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Reviewed By: jobetz On: October 30, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really sweet! On the kikyo thing, please, i really hate it when she's between inu & kag. NO KIKYO!!! yey!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 06:28 CDT
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Thanx for all the reviews!! Keep it up! I'll update asap!
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