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Reviewed By: NissiKat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 23:08 CDT Comment/Review: Hey i think it is a cute story cant wawitt o see what happens pls update soon ....::huggles:: :-)
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 22:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awe!!!! It's such a cute story! I'm already in love with it, and it's only been the first chapter! Wow, good job! Eagerly awaiting the next update ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: LadyMiaka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 22:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Eeee! Awesome story so far. I'm kinda disappointed that there's only one chapter so far! I was giggling when I read the part where Kagome was laughing about how his ears would perk up and move around. So cute... I can just imagine it. Well, keep up the awesome work. You've got me hooked and it's only the first chapter. I'll be waiting for the next one (hopefully soon!)
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