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| "Blood And Death: A Perfect Family Shattered" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Tahmy On: March 02, 2006 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was nice and i liked it.I am impressed on your writting abilities though there were a few gramatic errors. Also, i like your creativity. To tell you the truth i like sad stories! ^_^ Keep it up! >.
| Reviewed By: Babysoft-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style-7: The style is nice and easy, but perhaps it could have used a bit more detail. Mechanics-8: There were a few grammar and spellings errors, but the story was still readable. Originality-9: The story itself was pretty original. About the only aspect I didn't like was Yoh's initial reaction. Many times writers will have him lash out after a tragedy, and I didn't find that too effective. Enjoyment-8: This was definitely enjoyable if looking for a short story to read. Especially if you happen to like angst as much as I do ~sweat drop~ Overall-8: I think what kept me from giving it a higher rating was: 1) Some inaccuracies (Yoh and Anna have a son named Hana, the actual turn out of the SK tournament) 2) The Yoh+Anna factor (which I guiltily admit is a rather unfair bias, since the story really is good). Other than that, it was good. It would be interesting to see an accompanying fanfiction focussing on what Amidamaru went through.
| Title: Kenshin_Himura is writing this Review Neppy!
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Neppy! This is wonderful story, besides the fact that half the characters die in the first 6 pages! *Sweatdrop* As I read it I told it to Keishin over the phone and she started crying really hard and at the end she also said the story was lovely and- well she was speechless! You know besides you love of death (Lol) You're an awesome writer and I hope you write more Shaman King fanfics! Or RK or SM or etc ya know! Please do I would love to read and review them lol! Yarisha has asked me to have you read Blood Moon (Actually this was made in the memory of you ya know! 'Blood' Moon. It just had a little touch of us.) when it is updated once again and soon enough Interviewing Yusuke will be updated as well! Again I would love to read anymore fanfics you write! Just inform me when you do okay! Keep up the jood work my little Neppy-chan! And don't forget to write more or else!!! :Yarisha: OR ELSE!!! *Evil laughter* :Yusuke: Great fanfic Nep! And no it wasn't to deathy and bloody and... 0kay it was a little. You would makes a bad children's book writing! LOL! Hey maybe you base another story off this story... Hm... :All Three: WRITE MORE FANFICS SOON!!! SAYONARA!
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