Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 06:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Well, as you said, it's total fluff, so I can't really judge you on plot or character development. But it was lots of fun to read -- I don't know about having fun writing making a fic better, but it definitely makes it more fun to read -- & had me smiling the whole way through. Especially at pervy Tomoyo. *snicker* All in all, not a bad first off, given that you recognised & acknowledged that it was about as deep as a puddle. Very enjoyable stuff!
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