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| "A Day in the Life" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: I hate u
Reviewed By: IsisIshtarpe On: July 10, 2006 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
rating 10 because I'm too busy to go back and see what was wrong so get lostanyhoo I hate u because that was so sad,u made my favorite couple in a ...uh,something. or whatever. but if you dont continue this story *starts choking u* e-mail me at anirabbani@hotmail.com if u can and be sure to put the subject as "fanfic review response" or else I ignore it. I loved this. but u didn't tell more about kaiba.
| Title: No it's not crap
Reviewed By: Sakura-Laurel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It really isn't crap. Seriously. I loved it just as much, if not more, than any of your other stories. It was original, it was sweet, and it very nearly made me weep with sadness. I think I may even have nightmares of Seto killing himself tonight. My heart feels so heavy after reading this. *cries* It's just so SA-A-A-A-A-DDDDDDD!!!!
| Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cried...I actually cried during the dream part. It was touching, and amusing, and sad, all at once. I liked the way you described everything happening, like you never said Jou was sad in the dream, you just showed him sobbing. I bet your English teacher loves you. The story seamed very down-to-Earth and believable. I know you weren't planning on continuing this, and it's good how it is, but it would be very very cool if you wrote a sequel or followup chapter. (hint hint)
| Title: Great songfic
Reviewed By: Ladybard On: October 27, 2004 13:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great. "A Day in the Life" is one of my favorite Beatles songs and IMO, it was well used. You did a great job building, I'm lookinf forward to your next story.
| Title: *Mouth drops open in a very unlady-like way*
Reviewed By: Sian On: October 27, 2004 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..... That was like amazing! Beatles songs are great, but not easy to write to as soe make no sense what so ever! I love the ending. Makes you wonder plus no one died! YAY! I hate death in fics.... Makes me all sad 'n stuff. I love the way Jou handled Kaiba at the end too. LOVE IT! ^_______^
| Title: Sweet..
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, this was a one-shot? Come on, I want more. That was a evil way to leave it. But all in all, I liked it. T'was very sweet. And I love how Jou and Seto are like that to each other. I'm glad that the whole Seto dying thing was just a dream. I was about to cry, lol. Jou is such a little sweetheart, kind of. And no, it wasn't crap. If it was, I wouldn't like it so much. =D
| Reviewed By: anubiset(to lazy to log in) On: October 26, 2004 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is a mean way to leave it. Why did Kaiba do it? Poor poor Jou.
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