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Reviewed By: shadow 85 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it sad firs you let tysons gramps die and you dont even let ty takeshis car to collage but other then that is a goo fic please update and if you an idea for a chpter heres one tyson and kai just got together and max is all alone so why dont you get max to kiss kaiand tyson walks in and see it and theres your drama
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: KiraKinomiya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was awesome!! lol i cant wait til you review!! lol are you going to put a lemon in there? lol i loved the story!!!
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Reviewed By: Armen On: May 16, 2005 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you are one of the best (if not the best) authors! Fantastic mind, originality, and writing. Love all your work, I've read them all, some at least twice. Thanks for writing and continue!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh i love it so far i can't wait to see what happens pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeease update soon i don't know if i can hold out much longer withoutt an update
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Reviewed By: Beysie (too lazy to log in) On: March 22, 2005 19:41 CST
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Damn, missed Kai! Gotta keep my eyes open as he explores the city... I may get lucky and kidnap both Kai and Tyson, eh? Oh, the pervy-ness I could get up to with both of them! Good chapter here, nice to see Kai back in the fold! That was quite a reaction to his entrance, the way Tyson reacted. Oh, they're gonna be roomies to I'll bet! Update soon, ok? I can't wait to see what you have next!
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Reviewed By: Every Heart (not Logged in) On: March 21, 2005 23:59 CST
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may i suggest putting Max and Tala together? it might be interesting, but it's just an idea. plz continue! it's coming along great!
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Reviewed By: Esca On: March 05, 2005 03:52 CST
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I love this. Hurry and write more! More action! More romanticy-ness! Yay Chief and Hilly!
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Reviewed By: Lady Kirei On: February 07, 2005 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, Kali. I thought it was really good. I really liked it!! I can't wait until the next chapter is updated! Lady Kirei ^_^
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 00:28 CST
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Small city in central Alberta? *sniffles* Damn, you brought the BBAU to my doorstep? Literally? Look at me, I'm so happy I'm crying! One word of warning... I'm now on the lookout for Kai... I fully plan on kidnapping him for myself! *drools* Kai is my fav bishie... update soon, ok? One word of warning... put it in the north side of the city... The "Mall" is monopolizing the west end, and the UofA in the south side... East end is rather slumy, downtown is annoyingly crazy. This is just info from a native... LOL update soon, ok? I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Ranmaaa On: February 04, 2005 22:19 CST
Comment/Review:
KEEP IT UP KALI!!!!!
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Title: I LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewed By: Black Angel Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*takes deep breath* I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I! LOVE! IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You so have to keep going it rocks I love it totally I love all your storys you are the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 18:41 CST
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Ok, that's it... I've officially added you to my favorite authors list! You are an awsome writer, and this story proves it! The angst is great, and I'm excited to see everyone getting together at a university... in my own country! I almost wish I could go too... *sigh* Oh well, I can dream, right? hehehe I can't wait until you update this fic... I so want to see Tyson and Kai meet up again... they do seem to need each other, eh? Update this soon please! Now, I'm off to find another of your stories to read...
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Title: great wahooooooooo
Reviewed By: cookiemonster mwuahaha On: October 27, 2004 16:47 CDT
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lol grr dumb eclaimation mark dun work on this pc keyboard>< anyways wahoooo yaya new fic new fic thats so cool and aaah man you killed of gramps>< meanie but overall its a very very nice beginning to another brill masterpiece thats for sure heh heh *hugs* Jen
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 16:26 CDT
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i liked the begining. cant wait until you update.
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Title: First to review! i think
Reviewed By: Rhbadcat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start to this fic i enjoyed it a lot please update it soon cos i want to read more!
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