| "yokai no kokoro(heart of a demon)" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: PLZ UPDATE SOON
Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you got to update soon plz i cant stand to think that you lost chapter 3 please find it
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 15:44 CST
Comment/Review:
love it what more can i say sorry bout you having to start all over with the next chapter
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Title: Awwww...
Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story!! Please update soon!!!!
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Title: omg i liked it
Reviewed By: krazy_diamondcandy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its me agian diamond! really liked this story alot to!write more now!..lol plz!*looks at u with a puppy face*let me know when put the next chapter on thank ya. talk to ya 18r love ya lotz ur best friend diamond
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Title: not much
Reviewed By: chesterzerousygirl On: August 06, 2005 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well... its a start. just try and make your chapters longer or something. im just speaking my mind. (hint) dont make your characters so obvious to the readers. try and put some suspence in it. maybe some romance. a twist would be nice.like you could make him a little more enjoying the fact that he is helping a person with revenge on his brother.and no harm can come to it if you make some action like fighting (verbally)between Sesshoumaru and Kegome.
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Eternal Kenmei JM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know it's not nice to write an awesome story then go months on end with out updateing. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: I think I love you
Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (Am I ever log on?) On: March 27, 2005 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am a Inu/Kag person, but lately I've been a Sess/Kag because of a certain author (not you)......CRAP I CANT REMEMBER THEIR NAME!!!! Plus she's really great with the pairings, maybe if I can find the name you can read some of her stories. ^_^ Well, I love the fic, you BETTER update soon or I'll get a really really really REALLY mad Sesshomaru on you! (though that might not be such a bad idea) *thinks for a moment* WTF! THAT DIDNT COME OUT RIGHT!!! BAD ASHLEY!!! BAD!! BAD!! I soooo sorry it's just that one of my best friends is a real pervert!
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Reviewed By: sesshyz koiishi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i happen to like Sess/Kag pairings! They're so awesome cuz Sesshomaru always end up doing something very sweet. Or he secretly likes her for a long time!
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: strawberry blonde [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 03:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your descriptions. the mind reading thing is new, and i think it's a good idea too. please update soon, for you left a cliffie and my mind is uncontent. ^_^
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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice beginning. Can't wait to see where this ends up going. One suggestion, Sesshoumaru's mind reading seems a little abrupt to me. But that's just my opinion. Other then that, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kiayea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 03:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Good begining. Look forward for more.
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Reviewed By: Miyu_marine On: November 29, 2004 07:54 CST
Comment/Review:
ok next time write longer chapters, other than that it's pretty good, keep writing! nice descriptions. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Isis-Neptune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 20:27 CST
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Title: LOVELY!
Reviewed By: Isis-Neptune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have to say I really enjoyed reading this! I'm glad I took the time to read this, trust me I am! At some points I got a little confused but I just had to re-read and it was all right! I am curious really curious, to see why this transformation happened to Kagome. When you described her, she reminded me instantly of Sesshomaru, which I was like YAY! Don't ask why! Please do continue this fic, my lovely lady :) INFORM ME when you've updated PLEASEE!!!
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Reviewed By: ReincarnatedCat46 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly adore it plz write more for my mind to devoure..
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