| "Lunatic Pandora" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: arora_kayd [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed this fic so far. Especially the Cid/Vincent bits ^-^ I'm sad to see that it hasn't been updated in almost a year, and really do hope you'll continue. I wanna know what going to happen! :] Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewed By: Queen Saiyan On: June 23, 2005 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing I have to say, really, is please, PLEASE don't use the following in your writing: Azure orbs, ruby orbs, garnet spheres, sky-blue spheres, full lips, supple lips, thin lips, pouty lips. It's cliche and makes me cringe. T_T I really would have enjoyed your fic a lot more if it weren't for the inclusion of these things. You don't need to describe their physical features every time you mention them, you know? :) Over-writing makes it hard to understand what's going on when you identify the characters in a scene by their hair or eye colour.
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 19:21 CDT
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hidoi. where's the rest?! and what kind of chapter ending was that? that's such bull. i wanna see sephy again. and cloud and sephy together. wahhhhh! write more now!
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 19:04 CDT
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i trying to remember why i had myself only at chapter 2 when it was really chapter four. regardless, i love this story
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 19:00 CDT
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i think i've read this before, but whatever. good stories deserve to be read again. cheers!
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Reviewed By: GaaraOfTheSandBox On: February 27, 2005 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaaaaay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yes, I am reading it, I'm sorry it took so unbelieveably long time to, Keep going Kitty!!!
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Reviewed By: animefan001 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 14:45 CST
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I liked it alot, i am a big ff fan
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Yazoo2284 On: December 11, 2004 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good, i really like this chapter. after much time writing it, its finally done! now lets see here...only a how many more chapters? lol! the ending was good...looking forward to the next chapter! see you can do goos things ^_^
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Kaleb On: November 19, 2004 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think it was an interesting fic i really enjoyed reading it looking foward to the next chapter and you do wite good.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Yazoo2284 On: October 31, 2004 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job!! WoOoOtness!! i agree... Cid is PMSing! lol! well good luck on the rest of the story! *glomp*
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