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Title: woohoo!!!
Reviewed By: KAZ1167 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i really really like this. i was actually close to crying in some parts, and trust me, i RARELY cry. please please please please please please update soon. this is a great story and i kinda HAVE to see how it ends. Good look in getting your GED! =)
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Reviewed By: inu-kagdude [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 03:08 CDT
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it si great i really like it update frequently
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Reviewed By: Delfilia On: September 14, 2005 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hm...your story is interesting.. abit too dramatic for some of the chapters...& O.o i dun think Inuyasha said words like "Fuck" at all...But its a nice story & oops.. i think u spell Does wrongly..u spelled it as "dose" which is wrong..bt its a GOOD story..NiCE!! CONTINUE K??
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P On: September 11, 2005 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about you getting sick and goodluck on your chapter,but please update as fast as you can'see I can be'
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Reviewed By: vtchachi~ On: August 23, 2005 17:23 CDT
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Cool idea for the whole maze thing. Looking forward to reading the next installment.
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Reviewed By: KhayenRose On: August 03, 2005 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you are doing really good. I'm really enjoying this story. Sorry to hear about your hand and hope it heals soon. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 20:20 CDT
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Good chapter! Wow the final battle huh? I can't believe that Inuyasha finally let Kikyou have it! Too funny! A few spelling mistakes: here instead of her when Inuyasha asks fluffy why he is there and too instead of to when you mean also. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Sobao [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story and the way you write! Really nice job, plz update and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 19:48 CDT
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Cute chapter. I liked their little "fight." Now what happened to Shippou....
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 20:35 CDT
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Like the Rin POV. Good chapter...can't wait to see what is going on.
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: ALISHA 14 On: June 05, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER :). I CANT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPPY . LOVE ALL YOUR WORK . KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK WELL I KNOW YOU WILL :)LOVE YOU LIKE A SISTER ( I HOPE YOU DONT THINK AM CRAZY FOR SAYING THAT BUT IT IS TRUE)
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 19:36 CDT
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Alright, alright, I totally thought they were going to kiss there...shucks. Anyway, cute chapter I liked the confessions and the threats from Inu in there! I noticed quite a few spelling errors though; do you need someone to check them for you? If you do, let me know! Thanks for sharing your fic.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 22:35 CDT
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Great chapter, there are some spelling errors though. I really like how Hitomi handles Inu. I think you portrayed her perfectly. I can't wait to see how Inu approaches Kagome.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 30, 2005 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww..... althought it was a bit confusing to find out who was talking in the beggining it was ok! keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: Updata
Reviewed By: ^*%Kasha(not signed in) On: April 24, 2005 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed these story that you write i really do i'm so if i didn't review earlier sorry i think you should keep going because you'll get more review try you hard. If maybe you make your chapters longer as you write them, becuase you have a good story going on here.And i think you can make it.
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