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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 19:48 CDT
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Cute chapter. I liked their little "fight." Now what happened to Shippou....
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 20:35 CDT
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Like the Rin POV. Good chapter...can't wait to see what is going on.
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: ALISHA 14 On: June 05, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER :). I CANT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPPY . LOVE ALL YOUR WORK . KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK WELL I KNOW YOU WILL :)LOVE YOU LIKE A SISTER ( I HOPE YOU DONT THINK AM CRAZY FOR SAYING THAT BUT IT IS TRUE)
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 19:36 CDT
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Alright, alright, I totally thought they were going to kiss there...shucks. Anyway, cute chapter I liked the confessions and the threats from Inu in there! I noticed quite a few spelling errors though; do you need someone to check them for you? If you do, let me know! Thanks for sharing your fic.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 22:35 CDT
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Great chapter, there are some spelling errors though. I really like how Hitomi handles Inu. I think you portrayed her perfectly. I can't wait to see how Inu approaches Kagome.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 30, 2005 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww..... althought it was a bit confusing to find out who was talking in the beggining it was ok! keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: Updata
Reviewed By: ^*%Kasha(not signed in) On: April 24, 2005 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed these story that you write i really do i'm so if i didn't review earlier sorry i think you should keep going because you'll get more review try you hard. If maybe you make your chapters longer as you write them, becuase you have a good story going on here.And i think you can make it.
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Title: awwww.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww.... i'm hypnotized by this fic keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I like how you had Shippo confront Inuyasha to draw out his guilt and underlining love for Kagome. Shippo is probably the only one he would have confessed to. Will he go after Kagome? Can't wait to see...
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey, I really have enjoyed your story. By switching points of view between the characters, you have captivated me! I especially like this chapter because you were able to capture the thoughts that go through Inu Yashas head. It is amazing what things that half demon thinks will work. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and by the way, I really like your idea of the seducing demon. Poor Kagome did not know what hit her!
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Reviewed By: ravenwing On: February 11, 2005 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!! i loved he first cahpter on how u wrote that monologe on kagome's feeling i think that was written sooooo welll. Keep Writing ^_^ @')~
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Reviewed By: hakutou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!! Will Inuyasha finally realize Kagome's feelings?? PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: lab99 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 07:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME JOB!!! I REALLY ENJOYED IT!! **RAVO BRAVO!** Great action AND romance PLEASE CONTINUE!! YOu're VERY talented and I think you NEED to update SOOOOOOOOOON!!~Laura
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Reviewed By: Lady_Ravenclaw [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Really great so far! you've really peaked my interest :) i can't wait for the next chapter to come out and i hope its soon! Anyway thanx for reviewing my own fic! and i hope to read alot more from you in the near future! JA
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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