| "Images, Images, Images. (glad to help you with your mental problems.)" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Images, Images, Images. (glad to help with your mental problems)
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapters are a bit too short but otherwise really good. I couldn't help but see the date you last updated and I seriously hope that you'll update soon if not over the summer vacation. I'll be checking g2g Tchao! ^-^ lol.
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Reviewed By: yukimasta On: January 10, 2005 04:19 CST
Comment/Review:
nifty u should make more
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha is Mine(chelsea) On: November 30, 2004 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! I'm so glad your my best friend!!! Go DJ GO DJ GO DJ IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Tee Hee
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: kagome16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 18:43 CST
Comment/Review:
im sorry I won't be able to post the next chapter far a very long time because my parents say that the anime sites I go to have to much spy ware and Im not aloud to go on them. so yah! Very, very, sorry though! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Mogri On: November 12, 2004 02:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything happens so quickly, and I was kind of confused as to what was going on (particularly in chapter two). More descriptions would have been nice, and maybe some more backstory on their meeting online? It all seems tso vague and too convienient too me. I'd love to know more about the reasonings for the "cybering", since that does seem like an OOC thing for Tohru to do in the first place. But I don't know, lol. You can ignore me if you wish. =3 Those are just some suggestions ne? I hope to see more detail on the non-sexual portions of the story as well, as there seems to be a lot of focus on the actions.
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Reviewed By: kagome16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 09:44 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm sorry for not posting the next chapter when I said I was going to but my internet has been down. I'll get the next chapter up as soon as I can. THANKS!!!!
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Reviewed By: MirokusGurl2894 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
No offence or anything, but that really made no sense at all... I didn't really like it... I won't say I hated it, but I really don't like it that much, I can't understand it. Sorry! You didn't explain things good enough.
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: ghettoanimechik [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story but i dont know.. chap was too short, but great story, my opinion is that u shouldnt make it like, he just got 2 the room and they already havin sex, just make it more romantic! any wayz please ^date a.s.a.p!!!! great story! and also please read MY story... DESTINY MADE IT HAPPEN, im not finished (just started) but i'd like to have @ least 1 review!
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Title: nina
Reviewed By: Sakura 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story please update
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Title: thanks
Reviewed By: kagome16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
thanks everybody. Even though I didn't get my five reviews. I'll put up the next chapter. But I might have to do it tomorrow. THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Animebozzo On: October 29, 2004 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
coooooooooooooooooooooool!@#$
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha is Mine(chelsea) On: October 29, 2004 16:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY SO FAR!!!!!!!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!* Tee Hee*
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 18:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
you're cruel saying fivew reviews, but i understand. great sory and i hope i'm not the only one to say so!
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