| "New Pilot: Light of Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool! i like it! althought i dont think that kira would just kiss someone like that and i thought that the girls name was flay not faye but hey its your fic you have fun with it but i really like it pls update soon!
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Title: Anna ni isho da tta nano ni
Reviewed By: Silver Frost [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 01:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Hehehehe the title of the first ending song of G SeeD is Anna ni isho da tta nano ni something about being together or something --___--, sends chills down my spine everytime I hear the violin interlude ^_^ The second one is River, then Find the way is the last I think....is there something I missed? If you're wondering how I knew, first me friend is a Gundam addict like myself and updates me wih everything involving Gundam and second I happened to buy me self an official soundtrack including the remix of the songs ^_^ About your fic, there are some typos and somewhere in between it was somehow rushed i think, because one thing is happening then another one happens without the first one ending *__* Don't take this the negative way I hope that this will help you improve and also to avoid doing the same mistake twice. I'm here to support ya and I like how your story i developing so update when you get a good idea okay? don't rush it and take your time. Peace out ^__^
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Title: Cheer
Reviewed By: Silver Frost [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 00:49 CST
Comment/Review:
woah, your first Gundam fic and you get yer first flame --_-- don't let that get you down, turn that frown upside down, do not not laugh I'm no clown ^_^ hehehehehe just improve for the better I'll see the next chpater right?
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Title: bad
Reviewed By: ihatekikyo On: November 06, 2004 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
badbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbad
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 12:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow this is really good. I hope you update soon.
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