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| "Falling Into the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: I'm curious, now.
Reviewed By: Lady Sai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never seen Ai no Kusabi before. Basically, I ran into your fic by accident. Since I liked the title you gave it, I decided to venture inside. To my utter joy, it's very rare to find someone who can knit words as smoothly as possible. There was something very poetic about the entire narration that I liked. I even feel sorry for the guy. I usually do not like reading hentai, esp. yaoi, but for some reason, I can't pass this one up. Your writing alone "lures me to the lamplight like a moth."
| Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 12:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, this was some excellent writing! Very deep, and I enjoyed this a lot. I like the perspective you put on the whole thing... this was like a bunch of "dear diary" entries. Thank you, I really enjoyed this! Keep up the good work!
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