| "Harry Potter and the Sisters Black" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: SmacksKiller [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've was very surprised to see you on this website and even more to see chapter 3 here and not on ff.net. Any reason why?
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: zaxxon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You see Harry, you're uncle is seeking for the other team." "You mean uncle Vernon's a…" Harry cringes and his butt automatically tenses up at the thought. "Yes, he's a poof." Seeking for the other team?Quadditch(sp?) reference, I take it. A poof? I thought that was a sound effect, not a term.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 09:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Title: Chapter 1 Review
Reviewed By: zaxxon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great chapter, and interesting concept.
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Reviewed By: onilionheart On: November 02, 2004 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok u have a good plot going keep up the work updateupdateupdate
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: DOOPLE On: October 30, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it please update it was great!!!!!!!!!!dsfd
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