| "Aishiteru Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats actually one of the better lemons i've read...lol I think it's funny how we can all casually talk about this stuff. If we were in public (talking about it) and didn't have the label "lemon", it wouldn't be "socially acceptable", and people would be all "whats up with those twisted freaks?" so yea...anyway...don't mind me, its 12:43 AM, so im a little loopy...
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: InuKagsChild1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story rocked! Dont worry about the lemon, i think it was really good. its a shame that i cant write them for my life. But like you said it was your first time. i've read stories by ppl who write lemons all the time and they all SUCK! lol. anyway i think you should make a conyinuation!
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Title: your fanfic Aishiteru kagome
Reviewed By: anime_fan141 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i like your fanfics so far, you should add more and let kagome have inuyashas pup that would be a good continue , but it is your story ,but that is what i would like to see ,or even if you just addd more chapters ,that would be cool also
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your lemon was good! Don't let flamers bring you down!
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Title: hey this is just a fan
Reviewed By: AnimeCutie101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is brooke and i just read you'r ff it was awsome you should soo make a part 2 to that and like tell if kagome get's pregnate or something like that ok well um..... PLEASE e- mail me when you have another chapter on this story it's cartoonfreak14@hotmail.com thanks a lot *brooke*
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Reviewed By: Darkness Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job and ya go ahead and right another one if you want it wasnt bad, pple are just self concious when they right their first lemons or first fanfics
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 22:57 CST
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Wow that was pretty good! There were a couple of spelling errors, but I'm not big on that. I liked the story. You did really good. I do think you should continue, I would like that!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was okay,but you need to add more details,I don't write lemons so I'm not really sure how to do that,but i tink reading something like what your going to write helps lot,read the one-shot COME HERE BOY,i forgot who it's by,it's a realy good lemon and it might help. and as far as your grammer goes don't worry about it to much,my grammer sucks! just before you upload the story re-read it and look for mistakes,your not going to get them all but still,try to get some of them,and if you do re-do this story PLEASE let me know k? I would really love to read it again after it's been clened up alittle.and please do not think this is a flam! because it's not,just trying help you out alittle,and remember,it's your story so do whatever you want with it,and if someone tells you your a bad writer(which has happend to me and it dosen't feel good)don't listen to them.if you think your a good writer then your a good writer k? and keep doing what you love doing! ^_^ ja ne! Much love Dark Angel Of Love
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 22:15 CST
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I liked it for the fact that it was your 1st it was pretty good...I LOVED the ending..>LOL...the grammer was off ut heck who am I to complain my grammer SUCKS...LOL...hope you write more inthe Future...THANKS:D
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Title: some tips to make this better
Reviewed By: Fire_star_mistress85 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should go back and reread this fic and fix all the little mistakes. 2) Make the lemon longer and add more details.3) More dialogue! If you work on that then this fic would be a whole lot better and you might get a few more reviews. Hope you do edit this one-day and keep those tips I just gave you in mind when doing lemon/fics in the future. ps. I loved the tape recorder thing!
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