| "Half-breed" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Shikon baby JK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2008 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read anything that tells his life like that. I thougth it was deep and would tell why he asks sertain ways and picks fights all the time. Over all it was different and there's noting wrong with that. Hope you write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 17:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
A much needed elaboration as to why Inuyasha wanted to become a yokai so badly. It's not the only possible explanation, but it is a good one. I really admire how you've managed to make Inuyasha sound and think the age he's supposed to be in the fic: children's thoughts are quite hard to nail.
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Title: Cute
Reviewed By: Sakume On: August 30, 2006 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very cute. I liked it a lot. I rated it a bit lower on the first couple because there wasn't enough detail for me. But I did enjoy the story quite a lot.
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Title: so sadd
Reviewed By: lalaaaaaak On: June 21, 2006 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its like hes not choosing to be born that way soo why pick on him. its very good.
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Reviewed By: youkai chick supreme On: November 10, 2004 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome... and depressing. awesomely depressing! i loved it. i loved the ending. and i love how it showed how he was slowly changing, becoming more sullen and angry, like the inuyasha we all know and love. great stuff.
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