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| "Closer To You" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: TOTALLY AWESOME BUT COULD BE DARKER!!!!
Reviewed By: madhatter45 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE PLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEE MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS FANFIC, BUT I THINK IT WOULD BE COOL IF YOU TOOK A DARKER TURN ON IT, LIKE GO MORE INTO VEGETA'S POSSIVENESS THAT WOULD BE CREEP, AND TERRIBLY TERRIFIC!!! PPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSEEE OH AND LET ME KNOW THE MINUTE YOU DO!!!!
| Reviewed By: Deaths Obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
UMMMM.... yeah that is a bit OCC. I don't think that Vegeta would refer to himself as her boyfriend, but I see where you were going with this. It was pretty cool, I think that you should extend it and make it into a story maybe. Anyways, nice little one shot! ~Deaths Obsession
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