"Concrete Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: HI Reviewed By: Angel Kitsune On: March 13, 2005 20:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi I really enjoyed the fic and I have some Ideas for the characters deep dark secerts .Holly could have a really sad past being a cutter or belimic ,Hare could have lost a great love or somthing and maybe Golems old friends were murdered ? or is that 2 bloody and gruesome ? anyway thought I would give it a shot remeber keep up the good work !!!^_^
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Title: RevIEW Reviewed By: BlackHeartedMiko On: March 13, 2005 20:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story and would like you to update soon since its benn nearly a year since you last wrote I hope you don't give up on this story it has a great plot.
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Title: review Reviewed By: Snowy rosey On: March 09, 2005 17:26 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi I really enjoyed your stroy so far but the second chapeter was a little confusing, anyway please update soon I can't wait to find out what deep dark secerts they have . PLEASE UPDATE
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