| "The Ceremony of Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. It goes into detail about everything about the sohma's,and its so Kawaii! well in my opinon anyway. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Misoka Asagi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 14:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Kyo! Nooo! This is really great! Mmm Akito dead...yes! This not being finished not so great.
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Title: Good story!
Reviewed By: KittyPerson On: December 05, 2004 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so sad! It made me cry! And my friend too! Way to go! Keep on going! Bold
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Reviewed By: hinshihoushi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really enjoying this. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: darkdreams69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, *cries* no seriously, this made me cry. It's so good, and touching!They're so cruel to him, and Yuki...Yuki's being forced to beat him up... You're such an amazing writer! --Darkdreams
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Reviewed By: plaid_pj_pants [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 03:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... my god. I've been reading this for the past 2 or 3 hours, and got SO close to crying a few times! SO SAD! But, you're doing a great job.. it's very interesting. Update soon. -goes off to cry-
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Title: i love it!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
deep, emotion evoking, and fun to read. I hope that you can keep up the story, sinc you've kept the characters themselves.
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