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| "Broken Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Hanabi jou
Reviewed By: Hanabi jou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really impressed on how you portrayed the characters in this story. In other words, I'm glad that you didn't show Kenshin as some possessive sex predator, or Kaoru as a 'so-seductive' whore! I really dislike when people write their stories showing my two most favorite characters like that...it's really unhealthy. Though I have to admit that I like to read those type of stories when I'm having a bad day... Anyway, I loved your story and would love to read your next chapters! Ja`ne!! *-*
| Title: cool
Reviewed By: smalfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really interesting idea, but because Kaoru is a girl AND a warrior, I would think she would want to contain her emotions from the sight of others. Anyways, cool story, and yes, there is a bit of spelling errors and sometimes you use the wrong words. But, if you went back and edited it, you could find them easily enough. Great story, I can't wait to see more.
| Reviewed By: Vivian On: January 10, 2005 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great! I can´t wait to read more. Keep it! Congrats
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