| "He's Commited Alright..." Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: July 11, 2005 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, my favorite part is when Kagome says, "spoken like a true stalker." I just find that funny. Anyway, please update.
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Reviewed By: sacaku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 23:55 CDT
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I can't wait to read the next chapter so PLEASE update as SOON as you can PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ValleyKnown On: December 02, 2004 19:38 CST
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Wonderful, really! I love the way you have characterized Kagome! Many people seem to think that Kagome is an easy person to write--she's really not, for most that is! Her many moods are all pretty much equally proportional, but for some odd reason people like to either make her the weakling, damsel-in-distress type, or the headstrong, mess with me and I'll kick your ass six ways to Sunday! She really is just a happy medium, and you catch that and write it well. I love the description of Kurama...excuze, *Minamino-sempai*! ...and the ass of a god! Very lovely, that--and funny. I'm sorry, I have a strange sense of humor. I was confused in the first chapter about the Japanese words--perhaps a short dictionary to refer to at the end or beginning of each chapter to help out my poor English-and-partial-Spanish-speaking self? I hope you update again soon, because I really do like this story! Take care! ~~VK~~
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Reviewed By: Storywriter10791 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 23:36 CST
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this is great! i just love it!!! i was wondering if it was possible for you to e-mail me when you update this fic because mm.org doesn't have author alert... so PLEASE?!! i mean, i just love your fic! so, anyways, please, please, please, please, please, (i think you get the point) update this as soon as possible!@!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 15:53 CST
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ROFL!!! It's funny! I like it ^_^. Hope to hear from you again soon.
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Reviewed By: baa baa black sheep On: November 02, 2004 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice keep up the good work can't wait to see updates!
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Reviewed By: aiw On: November 02, 2004 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: solqua [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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hoooya, a kur/kag pairing, YES
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Reviewed By: kill kikyo On: October 31, 2004 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far your story is great!! One of my favorite parts was 'You don't know who Suiichi Minamino is?!?!?!?!?!?! (Kagome How Could You *sob uncontrolably* -_-) Please update asap. Oh and good to know your a fellow Kikyo Hater!!!
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