Reviewed By: Dustbunny3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! It's about time I found another TouyaKeiko fic. This is only the third that I know of and one is mine. I was getting desperate ^^' Anyway, I enjoyed this although I'm not much for sex scenes. It was very tastefully and tactfully done, though. You need to watch your mechanics a bit closer but who doesn't? The characterization was lovely and naturale. Kudos ^-^
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