| "Mistaken Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: disregard this
Reviewed By: hi On: March 16, 2005 19:03 CST
Comment/Review:
just trying to read my reviews. ^__~
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero not signed in On: March 07, 2005 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole plot, in my opionion, was good but the story line went to fast, one minute inuyasha is fighting with kagome, than almost about to have sex with kikyo than next minute he's Kagome's mate and they all of a sudden defeated Naraku. I just thought it went kinda fast because it all happened in a few days. I don't really know what else to say, I'm hoping I didn't offend you though but if I did than I'm sorry I did so. Ja Ne fujinakaheero
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Title: Jackia
Reviewed By: Jackia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey love the FF so far, but there's no chapter 5. Is there a reason for this? FF is going well!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: February 22, 2005 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is nice, but the formatting can use some work. Chapter 5 (the lemon chapter, named Demonic Desire I think) is also missing. Please upload it soon along with the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 20:22 CST
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OMG I love this chapter its great you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:28 CST
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OMG I love this story you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 14:12 CST
Comment/Review:
i like this keep it up ^_^
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Reviewed By: Arthur'schick On: November 29, 2004 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this fic, but there are some problems. First, Kagome was 15 when she met Inuyasha, not 16. Second, how will Kagome be able to explain her good health (ie cheerleading pracitce) among all her bizarre diseases? Third, if Inuyasha really did think Kagome was sleeping with someone else, he would not run into a cave and cry. He would go to Kagome's time and try to kill that unfortunate man. Despite this, I think you're doing a really good job, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: So good!
Reviewed By: green_blue_eyed_yuna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my oh my what a pleasant story.....I WANT MORE!!!I crave it!!....please?:D
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Title: moonlightmiko
Reviewed By: mackenzie On: November 22, 2004 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COME ON PLEASE GIVE US THE NEXT CHPPY!!!! PLEASE give it 2 me please i love this story sooooo much and if you don't put it up soon i'm going to kill mysilf (lol) and i love all your storys they so cool. did u read the story 'fireworks' this a M/S story
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Title: love it!!
Reviewed By: mackenzie On: November 14, 2004 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god i love all od you fic's they are so cool! and i love the one um...what was it called oh Hellaween Joy! i really like it when kagome touch Inuyasha's ears and i was like "you go girlfriend... all the way" so i have to go new but is u put up some more characters of the one where kagome thinks that inuyasha sleeps with kikyo( i hat her so much) and inuyasha thinks that kagome in sleeping with some guy in her time. that would make me really happy PS: 2 E-mail me it's hotchick37_71@hotmail.com um... so byb :)
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Reviewed By: Mayhem On: November 03, 2004 20:13 CST
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OK, I'm hooked! Next chapter, next chapter, next chapter!!!!!!
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